what is love (http://home.comcast.net/~ryan.siu/wil1.mp3)

we started a band, i would just like some feedback thanx~!

lol, my comp is so slow at opening it, that five minute after i clicked, i was on another site, and i started hearing "WOOT Woot woot wot . . . . . WOOT Woot woot wot . . . . " then i remembered that i had clicke on ur link, and rushed back to give my opinion!

well i like the music, and your (your?) singing's not bad, but if your gonna make a demo, you might want to run through a filter, to get rid of the small flaws that our vocal chords make almost no matter how we speak (sing?) if you dont have access to or cant find a filter online, then my best suggestion would be to record it through a mixing program, so you can tweak it how you like. but thats just me... :whistle:

yeah about that....

we're too lazy to really set up the entire system soooo we just wing it with one of those one set thingers...

and the beeping noise is the eletric guitar~! hahaha sounds like an alien O_o

That's pretty good actually, but you need to improve your singing X_X It's not off or anything, but it is very uneven.

haha i'll make sure to tell that to our singer....he's never taken voice lesson's before, and he was trying out his singing voice as opposed to his talking voice...

Yeah I agree on the singing part, I it doesn´t keep the same quality as the intrument on the back. And the ´alien` sound doesn´t fit when he sings. Maybe should put a synth-sound instead, then I´m sure it would sound much better.

I like the intro, sounds like a Final Fantasy song.
Good song, except from the singing part , too much waving with the voice. Maybe because of puberty, I don´t know. :sweatdrop:

The vocalist needs some lessons... -_-

The main things that I didn't like was the lack of drums (they tend to make band songs more "complete"), and the lyrics weren't very good. I guess you need your lyricist to improve a bit.

As for the electric guitar, I guess you were trying to be creative with that alien sound, but it didn't sound very catchy. :huh: I like the piano, though, except for that last note...

Don't get me wrong, the song's good for a band that just started! ^_^

yeah about that...i got lazy with ending the song cuz it's actually supposed to change minor and lead in to another song

and we actually think it's lacking the violin as opposed to drums

well we're just playing around