Well i have no idea what i made i just did whatever and just came up with this in just a couple of minutes. If you have any ideas for me please leave some and comment me cause i at a stand still right now. I have no idea what to call it so i just left it title cause i don't know.

PS: Its really really short...

Random =.=;

I'd suggest you to read music theory, learn about structure and form, harmony and melody. Then compose again, and try to be self-critique while doing so. When you've done that, you've become a better composer, and we will all envy your scores.

(Ignore the above if you're not commited though :))

I don't know what to say... :heh:

Well, if it's your first song, I can't say it's bad. You have a lack of melody. Maybe make another intsrument play a melody. I think it'd help. Chords are not melody...

Noir7 is right. You should read up on some music theory. ^_^

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Unique pattern in each hand. Sometimes block chords tend to get a bit "chunky", but they didn't seem to do so here, except maybe a bit near the end, though I didn't really think so. :) At first, it seems like random notes being hit, but I think there's more to its form than just that. However, I think you'd benefit from analyzing which chords you are trying to use and make sure you stay out of using the third in the LH part unless it is on a broken chord. (This is just a personal "rule" of mine, but it really does make the LH chords more powerful and less cluttered.) Altogether, this is a cool piece, and a good starting point, but in the future, try to aim for giving the listener a more unified melody and mood to capture. :)