That's right, I named it Untitled1.mp3 Well, not really new, it's more like extension/remake of my first composition, but it sounds pretty distinct.

I listened to it twice, but I still can't figure out its structure, and where it is going... Have you just placed out random chords and added vocals to it? This piece seems way to random to me. It also ends all of a sudden.

1:06 minutes of nonsense. <_<

Originally posted by Noir7@Jun 12 2004, 05:22 PM
I listened to it twice, but I still can&#39;t figure out its structure, and where it is going... Have you just placed out random chords and added vocals to it? This piece seems way to random to me. It also ends all of a sudden.

1:06 minutes of nonsense. <_<
Right.

it is a bit random... it seems to gain some structure around :30... but the ending is way too abrupt. good start, but it needs a bit more structure