Hello AGAIN (second post today). I'm trying REALLY hard to finish this CMA entry by...today...and I wanted people to critique what I have so far. Can anyone...you know...do that?
Edit: Took out part about "nocturne" since I finally changed the name.

1. If you know it doesn't sound like night music, then why wouldn't you take time to change that? That's the whole idea of a thematic CMA

2. Why would you create a new thread about this?

Well, for one thing, no one seemed to want to post on the old one, and I felt really desperate. For another, a nocturn isn't the ONLY kind of night music.
Edit: Sorry about the bad judgment on my part.