Hey everyone. This is grim_nemesis new comp. thread! I'm gonna start with these songs, 'cause that's all that's finished for now! Please leave comments!
Whoa! Sorry, that Beneste one and pmtcwl got messed up!

Ok heres another one. Its an arrangment from a song we sang in choir this year (it would be much better if I could do Dynamics very well on Cakewalk!). It is called Cross Cry. Ignore Prelude No. III please. I needed somewhere to post it.

The lyrics to ` The good man2`sux tho XD

You can see the LYRICS?! Sorry it was being submitted to a contest where they like muchy lyrics. How can you see the cheasy lyrics?!

erm....I play it with WinAmp.
P.S. I laughed my ass of, when I read the lyrics, ^^

Yeah...I'm not the best...song lyricist in the world but It won me the contest and that's all I care! Is there anything about my song that you did like or were they all crappy?

Hey, why is no one posting on MY thread? :cry:

Well since your so desperate for replies here! im kidding :heh:
Ian's cross cry- I liked the beginning but I was expecting something a little more to come in. This song had some both good and bad points at times.
But its still a nice descent song. ;)

The Good Man
This song is NOT my style. It sounds cheesy. I can't see the lyrics, but they would probably go well with a SONG this cheesy.

Dark Battle HARP
This song could have done with a bit better melodie and a better chord progression, to say the least. It also needs accompaniment or something to make the pauses in between notes less empty.

Beneste
This song get's a little boring after it just keeps repeating, but it's a very good idea. It reminds me of some green, mountainy, wet place like Scotland or Ireland. It COULD do with a better ending, too.

PWMTC
This could sound like some kind of heroic theme, but the harp in the background makes it seem a little too mellow. However, I like the melody of the song. FINISH IT, though. (I know, I know, I'm a hypocrite!)

Ian's Cross Cry
This song WOULD be MUCH better recorded in real life, wouldn't it? I can tell. Klonoa is, of course, right. This song needs some patchwork in some places. There is a spot at 1:36 that needs a better transition and a part right after that where the hands are playing in octaves that needs fixing. Also at 2:20 that need to be added upon.