Yo,

I'm new here so I thought let's post a few of my drawing and see how they like them :) PLZ give advises I need them to improve! BUT PLZ keep in mind I'm only drawing for 10 days, so don't be too hash :P

here they are (click on the pictures to get a bigger version):

a frontal view of a girls head ( with fucked up hair :heh: )

http://img302.imageshack.us/img302/4246/mangam1noc3wm.th.png (http://img302.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mangam1noc3wm.png)

same drawing, only flat collored:

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/701/mangam1c4bo.th.png (http://img232.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mangam1c4bo.png)

this one is my best so far, I think it's pretty good :)

http://img302.imageshack.us/img302/1306/mangam2noc2tf.th.png (http://img302.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mangam2noc2tf.png)

hope you guys like it. And if you do or if you don't PLZ comment and say it. It gives me the motevation to keep it up and improve myself :)

bye and cyall
Stinger

very nice, i love the shading on the third picture, but i bet you could draw a little better. But I love them. :)

Nice pictures for 10 days drawing. I see pontential and space for improvement.
;)

not bad
but there's a lot of room for improvement.
the third image, he's missing the back of his head...if u draw it at that angle - there's no room for his ear.
what really helps to fix that if u really can't see it is by looking in the mirror at that angle and look at the frame of your head as it attaches to the neck.

but not bad keep up the good work

yo,

thanx for the comments guys,

'bout the bach of his head: yeah your right, didn't saw that before. Think that's allso cause the neck is wrongly positioned.

--I'll just comment on the 3rd drawing...--
The shading is ok, can improve with more practice.
Lets focus on the head now...
Hair does not 'plop' onto the head like a wig. You can show it more natural by drawing roots or something. As a viewer, I don't see the eyebrows. Unless the bushy eye lashes are his eyebrows it's a bit too low. His eyes are looking at different directions in my point of view. Noses are never sharp, they always curve. So maybe you can angle his nose and curve out the point so its rounded. His lips are ok, but you will improve it as you draw more. The rest is ok with the crinkles in the clothing. Don't worry, with time, your knowledge of where things go and how it is will improve dramatically.
Don't take my comment as harsh criticism.
I'm only trying to help you improve you drawings, that's all.
I'll post some of my sketches up when they get scanned.

just keep on watching animes and pick one style of anime drawing... keep working on it until you can come up with your own style. That's what I did.... unless my drawings look like some other anime. (which I hope they are not... otherwise I have to come up with a whole new drawing style)

Very nice.I like the eyes. But...eh...there's something wrong with the shoulders. :heh:

thanx all, I'll try to fit the advises in my next drawing. my only problem at the moment is I've got no inspiration anymore for a manga drawing :( and when I got a idea I'm too lazy to get started...hmmm..SHIT :\ x_x

I see the potential. :)

thanx all, I'll try to fit the advises in my next drawing. my only problem at the moment is I've got no inspiration anymore for a manga drawing :( and when I got a idea I'm too lazy to get started...hmmm..SHIT :\ x_x

you don't necessarily have to do manga or anime...cuz there really is no definition of what anime is. . . but if u really want to figure out how to draw or something, you don't necessarily have to listen to the advice of what others are saying (but then again, this and of itself is advice) because it is your own artwork, and you should develop your own style to however sees fit.

But...if you really do want to improve, my best advice is to look in the mirror or take a picture or something; figure out how figures actually look like and blah bah blah blah

Don't worry stinger. As an artist, we can lose inspiration. Just take a break from drawing and don't force yourself into drawing. Read a book, watch some anime, or just go hang with some friends. Sooner or later, you'll get an inspiration in no time. It happens all the time. I got stuck drawing not as good, but later after taking some breaks, it came back to me. Just take some time off and your good to go after that.
Hope that helps you, you'll be able to draw in no time.