Ok, so I'm new here, don't know a lot of theory, but have attmepted many many pieces. Looking forward to criticism and help...and such..so heres a few of my older pieces. Sorry for the lack of names...

Can you please supply us with the midis for your songs? :)

Liz happy tune - This one has potential, and it really does sound like a happy song. I think there should be a left hand part (like in measure 5 -10). And I think this piece should be longer.

Mystic childhood - The left hand part sounds pretty interesting. I think you should add more right hand parts to it. And I think this piece should also be longer.

flute harpsi sad - sounds like this tune is unfinished

Theme of the king - Hmm the Electric Bass part looks impossible to play, because it usually does not play chords and is 4 strings. So how do you play 6 notes easily at the same time with just 4 strings? I think the electric guitar should play the chords. The electric guitar on measure 1 to 2 sounds nice. Maybe you can expand that phrase also?

Liz Happy Tune:: Needs a better melody. By the time the song ended... I didn't have a significant melody in my head.

Mystic Childhood:: I can see this song playing in the background song in the old Sonic game.

Flute Harpsi Sad:: Best one so far. I like the flute part and the last to measure but that's about it.

Theme of the King:: Almost impossible to "pinpoint" the melody to this song.

I don't think I'm still in a good position to give advice and criticize but... I think what you need to work on is your melody. You are trying to use more than one instrument but try to practice composing only with a piano. (that help a lot for me) Besides that... I'm looking forward to see your improvement in a couple of months (like Badgerglue)

Sorry, i forgot to mention, none of them are done....

And I wrote these pieces a long while ago, so yes, they really need melody-help...i am currently going through a piano-phase, so thats always good ...

Theme of the king was the second piece i ever wrote, so yea...i kinda put 6-note chords in the elec.bass..Maybe multiple bases ...
Thankx for the words tho, ill work on 'em if i ever get around to it...i have that tendency to just not finish pieces.

I wish i could, but sadly I only have notepad 2005, I freind is lending me workbook, but i do not have the capabilities to make midis...sorry

Yea, here are somemore older pieces that are piano, (although mels theme is the oldest, maybe 7 months, its not piano and doesnt have 1 distinct melody, but thats because its part of a much bigger piece that i have yet to write , but it has many themes mixed in.)

(also, hannah theme is seperated into two parts because notepad=notebad and wouldnt let me fit it all in one document.)