this is a chinese folksong i've arranged for a short piano piece. the tune is something funny therefore i try to use some funny chords:lol:

plz give me some advices. thank you.

In this case, I actually like the dissonance. It's great! ^_^

Except the VERY beginning, I agree with Marlon, but the end note needs to be sustained longer.

Hahaha, that was funny. Reminds me of something that I heard in one of the Paper Mario games.

I have to disagree, the dissonance didn't work for me x_x Although, this isn't your composition so I won't judge the song itself.

thank for all of you
this is the same song i arranded for two violins

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