Hey there everybody. I wrote a song, recorded it on the piano, dubbed in the sax part, and I am now letting you here it. It's not really Anime music, or game music, but I want someone to review it. Please, be as critical as you want. Feedback is good no matter what, possitive or negative. Tell me what you think I should work on too. Maybe if you gave it a rating on a 1-10 scale, that would be pretty helpful to see where I am. Thanks alot.

That's pretty flowy, you know? Good use of repetition, and good choice on the instruments.

This would do great for a porn scene.

OMG, that´s so Porno music.

OMG, that´s so Porno music.
LOL well er it could be, also its jazzy, could do well in cowboy bebop lol

It IS porno music! :blink:

When I started playing the sax, I didnt think I would make a porno song, but now that you mention it, it may be a great career option for me!

LOL! So true. XD

K, here is another song I wrote. Tell me whatcha think. Feedback is appreciated.

Also, can you tell me which one, The first or second, that you like more?

Thanks alot.

K, here is another song I wrote. Tell me whatcha think. Feedback is appreciated.

Also, can you tell me which one, The first or second, that you like more?

Thanks alot.

I see no song...?:blink:

I added it, it should be there now

Ok, here's another. Once again, please tell me which on you like best. Thanks alot for any feedbacK!

This song ends with the porno song that I posted earlier, so see if you can see the connectiong.

Thanks for the feedback.

feedback?

Well...this is very different, I must say. I don't really KNOW how to critique this, but it's good! I'm just not really experienced in this area, but I like the Jazz element.

I loved the beginning but I don't like how it switch to the other song. I don't think it fit because the beginning had this great solo from the saxophone and then the style switched to something that repeats. I think this song would be really good if you maintained the quality of the first half.
You don't have to take my comments too serious because I don't fully understand jazz yet but I'm trying to.


And, how does everyone know what porno music even sounds like??

And, how does everyone know what porno music even sounds like??
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