My music what do you think?

well there is one...

this is what it sounds like a piano consert... it was made late one night on request of a friend over MSN, so it has no real meaning... he said that i should introduce some mozart elements, have i done that?<_<

is a song for those of you who like a folkish sound to it....

And this, Maestrosetti, is what i think of clowns.

there are over 200 more...

Your songs are pretty damn good. :)

i like Dig In !!!!!!!!! It sounds relaxing and cute !!!!!!! KAWAII !!!!!! eheheh I can sense some countdown in that music. Tempo is indeed increasing. Running out of time in digging ? AHAHHAHAAHAHHAHAAH

yupp! thats right! there is an increase in tempo to get the feeling that time is running out. thats what i meant for it to feel like.

somebody got some criticism?
I would like som constructive critique.

here are some more.
these are more intense songs

just so you know, the morepart of my music is gamemusic...

i heard a lot of you guys (galls) like the piano so here´s a tune with jazz-influences...

How are you so good?! :cry: They're awesome. :)

thanks!

its good, just the first few, there was something nacking at me...

the left hand rythum.. just gave a "Eww" sence to me.. but good songs.

well these are three of my favourites:
1. hero´s song- just strings here...
2. inside the beast- fully orchestrated
3. The Finishing Blow- hardcore action! a boss-theme for a megaman-like game...

If you want to use any of my songs in a game or something just ask!

As you've posted quite a bit of pieces at once, I'll just comment on the last three.

Hero's Song: Interesting take on a "hero" theme; has a sort of medieval knight feel. It'd be nice if you developed the theme some more, and added a countersection.

Inside the Beast: Sounds rather comical to me - It'd probably fit quite well for a light-hearted like Disgaea.

The finishing blow - It's not uninteresting, but feels somewhat "lifeless" - if you add some modulation/pitch bend, and some dynamic variation in general, it'd probably sound more intense.

thank you now we´re getting somwhere!

As you've posted quite a bit of pieces at once, I'll just comment on the last three.


The finishing blow - It's not uninteresting, but feels somewhat "lifeless" - if you add some modulation/pitch bend, and some dynamic variation in general, it'd probably sound more intense.

well the thing is I cant pitchbend or modulate:cry:
and the dynamic... I think its dynamic, others will have to decide on that one
^_^

the left hand rythum.. just gave a "Eww" sence to me.. but good songs.

what exactly do you mean by an "Eww" sence Maestro???

Wow. You've got good RPG music going here. I can't do backgrounds like that. Something I'm still working on. My favorite song was the Mini game one. It matched the title and didn't get boring. It would fit right in a mini game.

"Inside the Beast" sounded like something Rareware would make! It was wierd.

One thing I thought all your songs lacked was a good melody. I loved the backgrounds a lot but the melodies were never catchy or memorable and at times some of them sounded alittle random. Try taking abit more time on them.
Other than that, I loved the songs.

If we were to have another CMA (or whatever it's called) where we double up, I think you and I would be the perfect combination.^_^

like the right hand was kind of "Classic" sounding, while the laft had like a Bass kinda of rythum.. i don't know, just differne ti guess.

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"Inside the Beast" sounded like something Rareware would make! It was wierd.
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hmm... was that a compliment?
I really think it was a compliment!! yippie!!!

hey... by the way if I were to post another song what kind of song would you like to hear? piano, orchestra, synth, midi etc...

I'd like to hear a piano song.

I have a couple so i´ll post two:whistle:

hope you´ll enjoy!

And just make requests any time...

I liked the first one quite a bit. The seond one I felt the background drowned out the melody. Other than that it was pretty good too.

Post something with a pan flute! Do you have any songs like that?

This is a flute song, not pan-flute but flute anyway.....

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Ooh. Very celtic/medieval-ish, and soothing. :)

The first piano piece was ok. sounded like a few familiar songs (not saying it was a rip off of them).

the second one, i didnt get much of a waltz from it. but it was new. instead of doing the base note of something, then a 2 note chord, your did something a little different. i like how that was a different sounding melody..

The first piano piece was ok. sounded like a few familiar songs (not saying it was a rip off of them).


Well actually the two first chords are a rip from something heard on tv...
the most beautifull ´classical song i´ve ever heard. dont know the name of it though... but thanks

here is a song named "enemy territory" I´ve tried to make song to a game like Red Alert or Command and Conquer... oh it was done in less than an hour so dont be too harsh on me

the other one "platform 2" is for a megaman type of game, funny i feel like I have posted this song before in that case tell me

The road back: this is the first song i produced after being mute for a year,music-wise that is.

Harmony: one of the most beautifull songs i´ve made I think, it has no melody to speak of but its beautiull anyways...dont you think?@_@

The drums were a little weird at the begginning, but Energy Territory was pretty awesome BG Music. ;)

noted...

Enemy territory WOULD go well in a Red Alert type of game. I kept picturing that before I saw what you wrote about it.

Platform 2 sounds like it would fit into a Megaman kind of game or a Super Nes racing game. It would also fit very well into Flash Flash Revolution.(I don't know if you've ever played that game.) I liked this one because of that.

The road back: I like how you could hear the melody in this one. A few of your songs sometimes drown it out. It was pretty good. Wasn't very memorable though.

Harmony: I really don't know what to say about this one. :heh:

OFFTOPIC:


Wolfenstien: Enemy Territory

lol, just saying..

I havent played wolfenstein for ages so I dont remember any songs... but if you say so:blink:

Nah, just saying, the name of it. lol

O...K...:blink:

this one quite proud of.... it was made in an hour and a half.
what the score is about... you´ll just have to guess.

any feedback is wanted

track 3 is me playin´some disstorted electric guitar and some drums...
kind of keltic-arabic sounding....

world map: inspired by the ff7 world map song...

Don't Notice Me sounds... weird, I guess. It soudns kinda like a fairy tale-ish theme, and... well, I personally thinks it's awesome! :P

This is probably the last songs I post for a long time so give me the feedback I need...Please!...
I thought it would be a good idea to finish of with some battle themes, and a winner song just to keep the spirit high!^_^

by the way, I dont know if any of you has bothered to listen to all of my posted songs but if you do please post the name of your favourite one...
this would make me so happy!^.^

Battle Energy - There are some neat ideas in this piece, though they feel underdeveloped. The harmony and counterpoint are pretty sparse, and the phrasing doesn't connected perfectly. The mp3 version has some balance issues (everything is too "in your face"), though that might just be the orchestration (too much mids and trebel, lack of bass). Overall, this piece feels more like a sketch than a complete portrait.

Boss - In a complete contrast to the previous piece, the bass is very prevalent in this piece, to the point of being overpowering at times (for the 2nd section). It also seems that the alto sax is playing higher than it really should be (soprano sax would probably be more appropriate, unless you specifically want the texture that you hear in your synth). The piece has a pretty driving feel, though it has a rather inprecise feel to it. More polish and refinement would do it well.

No Chance of Winning - Nice job with the velocity variety in the drums and strings; this piece feels a lot more "alive" than your other ones because of such. The orchestration is pretty dynamic too, with the expressive points nice and full, while the other parts having a light but more tense feel. The only thing I can pick at is that the "melody" on the piano part is somewhat ambiguous, and doesn't particularly flow that well. Otherwise, this is a very solid piece. Good job.

Winner - Not much to say here, really; this sounds more or less like your typical victory theme: cheery and repetitive. I did kind of like the chord progression, though.

Though I haven't heard all of your pieces (or even the greater majority), I have to say that my favorite so far is "No Chance Of Wining" - it sounds like you've put a lot more effort in this piece than many of your others, and the style is one that's also more agreeable to me. Hope to see more like it in the future.

I think I might be cursed.... the pieces that i take some time with and really think, those are the ones most people find to be less thought through... but hey its the ones listening who have to decide on whats good or... not so good.

oh, and thanks for taking the time to write all those words man, appreciate it.

Edit: The counterpoint is not just sparse in "Battle Energy" there is no counterpoint in it at all... counterpoint is basicly when you take two separate melodies and put them on top of each other to make a whole. I didn´t find it necesary to mess things up more than necesary, the time signature and rythm does that fine by them selves, but that comment on the lack of bass, is good... got to do something about that.:heh:

I cant hold it back anymore... I just have to post this song, and dont be anxious about it, its harmless but very cool. it depicts an antivirus making its way through the computer and finding the virus...

Virus was really unique and I liked the whole style. I think you had succeed in the effect you want about the whole antivirus thing. I like the opening that intergrated really well into the song. Sorry but I can't post anything really that constructive.

oh, Meim is´nt that evil....

thanks for the coment, it warmed the heart

I think you did a pretty good job on this song. I didn't like it that much ONLY because I have a preference towards songs with a clear melody. It was good though. Hope you understand what I mean.

btw, this would go good in a StarCraft like game!

:( :unsure: :\ :lol: :P :bleh: :heh: <_< .....x_x

Whiskey and Cigarettes
This one was fun, and though it was sort of slow to progress in my opinion, it was very cool in how you organized the chords. I think you should expand on that one.

Narcissus Mirroring
Wow, this was very cool, and I really liked the echoey feel! It definitely made me think of a mirror, though maybe not so much the story of Narcissus.

Mechanical
Interesting technoish feel...I'm not sure I'm quite as fond of this one, but more because of my personal taste than because of how well done it is, which is very.

Spanx, I just have to say that "whiskey and cigarettes" was an experiment with some new drumsounds... so I can understand your feelings about the piano, its just the same over and over, with some tiny adjustments here and there.

The gods: This is a strange song but if you like it please say so...
Duderonomy4: this is my brother´s first song and he needs encouragement...
Pooreton(poor-town):...the name is self explanatory
Dust Road: life on the road
Harvest: oh happy day lets just harvest away!!!

i know i shouldnt post my brother´s song but i think its great and he would never post it himself...

I have´nt done anything for awhile but when you least expect it in comes mr. inspiration... in this case mr. strategy game inspiration.
im really satisfied with the drum sounds. and the sound of the song in general but give your opinion. its always you guys who get the final saying...^_^

heres a nice song. a love song of sorts...

some orchestral parts and stuff.

if there is something you feel is missing in this song, something u feel I should have left out or if u just like it give me a hollor.

PS: the girls on this forum can decide if its a good love song or not

c ya

Like I told you earlier, I like the Submerged song. It's pretty nice. ^_^

Ooo that's like the perfect title for that song....I feel like going swimming now.
Oh great song BTW! it really matched my mood....considering I just woke up from a nap and my brain feels like scrambled eggs.

PS: the girls on this forum can decide if its a good love song or not

Why only the girls?

Wow! That's really cool how you did the seperate left and right speakers! This is a great song! How did you do that, BTW?

Why only the girls?

Wow! That's really cool how you did the seperate left and right speakers! This is a great song! How did you do that, BTW?

OK the boys can have their say on the matter to....

I used Cubase, a program wherein you can do all sorts of thing...
like fx and stuff.

and thanks^_^

OK the boys can have their say on the matter to....

I used Cubase, a program wherein you can do all sorts of thing...
like fx and stuff.

and thanks^_^
Hey, i've heard of Cubase, my friends use it to adjust thier music (a Band)

Btw have you ever tried Pro Logic, or any in the Logic series?

nope...

To be honest, it can't be a love song.

Your drums are pretty damn good I have to say. the lead-symph, delay LCR synthetics really make it feel like your submerged. The only criticsm I have (apart from the fact that it can't be a love song at all) is that there were certain bits near the end where I think you repeated yourself a bit to zealously. I reckon you could have got the violins to make a more dramatic atmosphere as if a whole schoal of fish suddenly parted and revealed a sunken ship or some spectacular corale which would be your climax. Nice ending.

sorry, but if you're saying submerged is not a love song you're just listening to it wrong...
if you think about it as submerged in to love, in to the feeling, not in to water you might get it...

One_Winged, keep up the good work =)

spot on!!!

I like 'Ancient Forest'. It made me feel peaceful.

glad to hear that. that was originaly a piece I composed for a rewriten shakespeare-play called "Much ado about nothing" wich I was on tour in as a composer/guitarist/singer. although I think this version is much better...

You are sooooo better than me at composing music! I'm so jealous!