tonight I finished my fourth sonar PE project in .mid and .mp3.I think that this one represent agony.I would like to make it the best i can,so I need your comments dear composers(or anybody else)I need you to tell me what I have to make bettter because I didn't have the real song,only my memories.Thanks:)

-oath of order-song of agony-

If this is your song, i'm sorry I don't mean to be harsh but:
I hate it.

Maybe hate is a little to "Harsh", I just don't how its the same song through almost the whole entire song except for the ending.

If you wanted a rating, it would have to be: 2.5/10
Sorry, I didn't like it at all.

I won't even listen to this. You have lost my confidence.

Now get lost.

It doesn't sound great.. I'm not a composer or anything, but this sounds kind of random to me. Chords don't fit with the rest, it just doesn't sound right.

I suppose it lives up to it's name...

but really, clashing notes like that just isn't a good approach

you're all right,maybe i sould work more on it