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Noir7
July 1st, 2004, 10:15 pm
I want to hear what you guys think of this piano piece I made... I didn't want to create an extra thread just for this, but this song has nothing to do with my soundtrack. So go on and listen, if you have time. I also appreciate ratings/comments/suggestions, it would help me alot. ^_^

Al
July 2nd, 2004, 03:29 am
Very nice, loved the intro, liked the mood, everything. ^_^

3 things: 1) maybe you should name it something else, because it didn't sound like a fantasy to me, sorry; the piece itself is very good, but it seems to be more suiting for an emotion, like, two lovers or whatever 2) the part with the trill and the minor chord sounds weird to me, I can't put my finger on it, maybe it's too abrupt? 3) expand the ending, let us know it's coming, perhaps wrap it up by hinting at something from the beginning of the piece, in order to unify the whole thing

Noir7
July 2nd, 2004, 01:52 pm
Thanks for the suggestions! I'll take them into consideration.