welll i decided to start composing again even though it got kinda boring because of not having a good program to do it on..


ok i really dont have a name for this song...so i just called it have no name lol....tell me what u think...and right now i cant make it midi plz some1 do that for me...

Hmm.. actually, of the few things on the forums, I liked it more than usual. Now, I'm not all exited about it, but I can see a little work was put into it, and nothing seemed VERY random.

Nice job. :)

thx alot dont wory its not finished im still working on it so basicly its still a work in progress

Alrighty Then - Jim Carrey (used by me atm.)

can some1 turn it to midi for me...?

I have to disagree with Maestro. I found this to be very random. Even though it did have basic structure, it was like playing turbo chess (or whatever it's called =P). To me it sounds like you just continued it measure after measure with something that fitted, and it also seemed like you didn't put much effort into this (read: seemed, that doesn't have to mean you didn't). The arpeggiated section was the killing blow for this piece, and didn't contribute at all to the song as a whole.

thx noir7 ill think about what u said and try and make it better...

Sure, think about what he said, but make it better until you like it, and that it follows correct Music Theory Rules as well. :heh:

Well, you should put some petaling in for one thing. For another, a few of your rhythms at the beginning don't sound quite right. I also think that after measure 12 it gets kind of boring, and it has very little melody.

ok i called this one dream...now i spent about 4 hrs on this song i think its pretty good....its is complete but there are still some stuff that i have to change and what not....tel me what u guys think.....i kinda feel bad about it because its realy repetative and i basicly always use octives but it sounds really good...i hope u guys like it and some1 plz turn it into midi because my friends want to hear but i dont have any way to let them....across the internet atleast. with finale note pad 2006....

thx guys peace out..
-evan

Here.

did u like it?

it had its moments but a lot of things just pulled this piece down... to many to mention but one thing is the timpani...

aww...i really liked the timpini i guess its clear i dont know what sounds good and bad right? ok whould u say that to become a better composer a good program would help too?.....i wanna get like finale allegro or something like that....

sure a good program can make it alot easier to make more elaborate compositions, sibelius is my recomendation, once u get used to it you can work pretty fast.

it had its moments but a lot of things just pulled this piece down... to many to mention but one thing is the timpani...

I agree somewhat, but I don't think the timpani sounded that bad... until it got repetitive. x_x Try using different notes in the timpani, Badgerglue. BTW, I think somehwhere by the beginning the flute sounded a little too high... :unsure:

ok...i know i havent been on in a while but its because im finishing this year up in school..but anyways i wrote this song and its supposed to be a battle theme basicly....

i donno what u guys are going to think of it because everytime i put something up and i think its good u guys think its badbut anyways here goes.

nice song.
no one could seriously play that, though^_^
it kind of got repetitive after page 2.
and almost sounded kind of cluttered(as a whole piece)
still sounded neat.

lol i kinda realize no1 could play it...thx for the advice

Its not bad. But the lack of right hand in part of it brings it down a bit.

are u talking about mesure 14 through 18? because if that is the mesures ur talking about yes i need to fix that sometime lol....i acualy want to omit that part from the song.....if thats not what ur talking about what are u talking about? lol

Yeah it is measure 14 to 18. Just work out a melody on your head and put it in Finale. I personally dont use it because of the lack of drums.

The beginning is okay, with an okay melody. Nothing too interesting. The slow section is rather boring with odd voicing (too many parallels - I hate that =P) But the last section, where there's a large bass that accompliments is pretty nice - I like the cluster ><;; But when it goes to the odd rhythm again, it's boring. And it gets odd at the end.

Oh, and btw, I love the last note! Sorry, but I kinda laughed at the cresendo/decresendo. A held note on a piano cannot on descend in intensity. =S

Oh well, it wasn't so bad. Keep working on it. Try making it into an orchestrated version - that would be coooool. =)

okie dokie....well....i wrote this song...and i have to say it took me a while to complete but its really close to done tell me what u guys think ok?


ps. how do you make it into mp3 format on finale 2004? is that possible if it is true can u tell me how....

Heh, the lyrics are kinda corny - Is it true, or is it false? I thought it was corny. Hehe.

But melodically, I liked it much better than your rest. And btw, clean up the grammar mistakes as well. There - Their.

lol...okok ill change the lyrics thx for responding..