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xpeed
February 15th, 2006, 05:17 am
This is from one of the car scenes I drew for my small manga that I'm creating. It came out pretty good, just need to finish up the background and I'm set. :D What do you guys think?

The "Pushyo" is something my friend put in the drawing. :( He said it gave it a "Turbo" look. x_x Ruined the scene a bit but I can always redraw it.


http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/xpeed/CressidaMangaFinal.jpg

Dark Bring
February 15th, 2006, 06:38 am
This is good stuff. Personally, I'd suggest adding on the katakana and stuff using PSP or some other image program after you've scanned it onto your PC, if that is a viable option. I think a few more "streak marks" would convey an even stronger sense of the car moving around a slight curve at speed; thumbs up to your selection of angle of perspective! And there front bumper needs to extend more to the right and turn around the engine - it seems like its been sheared off cleanly at the headlight's side.

All in all, a solid pic with some niggling bits easily remedied (might take some time, though ^_^; ).

hell_xtremedawg
February 19th, 2006, 08:56 am
す~げ~~~~~~~~~
That's some mad art you've got there. I love the headlights.

RD
February 20th, 2006, 09:59 pm
I agree with Dark Bring. A few more lines will make it looks more "go-go-fast". But thats some great realism you have going there!

xpeed
February 22nd, 2006, 10:12 pm
Thanks. :D Here's another one btw.

http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y78/xpeed/S2000FrontFinal.jpg