Could someone look over this piece of music I arranged for mistakes. I may have written some parts with notes that a physically imposible to play. If anything else catches your ears, tell me that too!
THANXS A BUNCH!:)

Do you have a midi?

Oh yeah, I just added it

very very random....

What on earth are you rambling about you blind swede? Sounds perfectly arranged to me...

I think the flute went a bit too low, other than that I think you did a good job. At #60 it started to sound a bit weird though, but you managed to end it well with the sus chord.

very very random....

Mmm... I have to agree... x_x Not the whole song, but yeah...

What on earth are you rambling about you deaf swede...? back at ya!

I still think it sounds like a mess after the first 10 seconds.

could be my crappy midi sounds who knows.

It isn't random at all actually. It's just composed in a comtempoary-styled music form. Much like the 3/4 and ending parts of the "Sabre Dance," it has that randomness with complexity too.

At no point it sounded random to me. It's simply not written in the manner we usually listen to around here.

personally, i think that as an arrangement for a full concert band, there could be a little more variety amongst the instruments. All the lines are basically the same. For the melody that isn't really a problem, except for maybe at chords you could divide each note seperately amongst different instruments, clarinets usually have two or three parts so its easy their, but maybe only give the flute/oboe the main note (or give the oboe the middle note on chords with three notes)

maybe if you could figure out the chords, you could give low brass and low woodwinds some whole notes to fill up empty spaces.

Its all totally up to you though ^_^

Thank you all for your coments!
I have another piece I would like you all to look over for errors and I would also want to draw your attention to the vibraphone part. I am not shure if it can go that high.