Hello Guys.
Uhm...well, I'm new here and I just wanted to post a composition of me (or maybe more). If you like it, tell me and I'll post more (if someone tells me how I can post many compositions in the same post... :heh: )

This is important to understand the title:
I'm German, so the title is German too. It means 5 Ki's and an End. "Ki's" because it contains 5 words which all begin with "Ki" (at least in German). First carnival, which is in German Kirmes. Then church, which is in German Kirche. Then carnical again (that's why it's 5 Ki's, this one's twice). Then it becomes silly, which means in German kirre. Then comes cinema (a horror-movie) which means in German Kino. After that is only the Ending.

So finally, here it is:

Excellent idea you got there, I loved it. This is one of the best musical ideas I've seen so far. ^_^

Wow, that certainly was very interesting, haha. Very original and innovative! ^_^

Um, is there a story behind this piece? Is there some character that visits a carnival, a church, etc.? Because to be honest, I felt that each "ki" could have been a separate movement or piece. I personally felt like there should have been something that ties all 5 parts together, otherwise there's no point to doing what you just did. Because each part was too short and I would have liked to see more.

Hope you don't take that all that as offensive, since each part in itself was pretty good. Carnivals 1 and 2, you captured the flavour pretty well. The church was a bit slow for me because of the chords. Silly was silly, haha. But what I liked the most was how you went from silly to the cinema. That transition was awesome! And um, I initially confused the ending for another round of cinema.

But yeah, still a good job overall. Could be longer. Could have the parts connected and unified. Nice! :lol:

Reminds me of some Japanese anime's... a pretty nice idea, and structurally its ok, although some of the transititons between themes needs improvement (in my sole opinion).

Its nice especially because while I was walking around my room, the song repeated itself 3 times -_-' but oh well... Good job

Thx Guys!! I'm very positive surprised!!

@ Alphonse:
you've discerned the character of this one pretty good. It's indeed someone, who "travels" between these places. And because of that, there aren't real transition between carnival 1 and 2 and church. Just imagine a carnival around a church. You step in from outside and immediatly there's a complete different feeling. You step out and the feeling changes from one Moment to the other. There is no transition. And the ending is a part for itself.