here is my second composition.I need feedback and comments and what could I change.thanks all for the listening!

Why do you people create a new thread when you post your compositions?

becasuse they want people to check?anyweay did you like it?

If you want us to check out your compositions, then make one thread for it, and not a new one once you compose something new. It's annoyoing, and hard to browse later on when you search for something.

EDIT
Originally posted by "blazing manager"
anyweay did you like it?

And no, sorry I didn't like this one. =_=