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winndich
July 8th, 2004, 12:14 pm
after these very positive responses I now wanted to post my best piece I've ever made since now.
I made this one for contest, which began a month ago, so I don't know how high my score is.
Have fun listening.

Uhm.....I think I should explain the title of this one too :heh:
Well...It is for alto saxophone, which is in German Alt Saxophon, Cello, which is in German Cello too, and Harp, which is in German Harfe.
The title is compound by syllables of these words, with some letters added.
The title is Alllohphorphe. It was originally wrote Allophorfe.
The "Al" comes from Alt Saxophon. The "lo" from Cello. The "pho" from Alt Saxophon. The "rfe" from Harfe.
Hope you all understood it. It's not that simple I suppose.... :sweatdrop:

It's composed in two records (I hope that's the right word...). Unfortunatly I don't know how to segregate them whith my program. So when the character of the piece changes, the new record begins. it begins with harp solo, as a hint. hope you you can guess where it is, when hearing it...

Al
July 8th, 2004, 02:12 pm
Good stuff! ^_^

Two records? Do you mean two movements?

You have nice flow and instrumentation. There's always a nice pace for the music to unfold. The only thing I didn't like was the ending. It came too suddenly and abrupt.

winndich
July 9th, 2004, 07:10 am
Right, movement was the word I searched.

Is the ending really to abrupt?

Hellspire
July 9th, 2004, 04:42 pm
Nice work, I agree with Alphonse' suggestion that the 'end came too suddenly and abrupt.' I like the buildup you had at the end, and I was disappointed when you dropped the phrase like that. Perhaps a third movement should be added (get to work :heh: :heh: ) Just a thought.

winndich
July 9th, 2004, 08:17 pm
Hmmm...think, I could do that, but it's kind of too late. It's already at the competition...

Anyway, I want to post another piece I composed for my mother's birthday. But I did the three movements seperate. Can someone tell me how I can post many files in one post?

Hellspire
July 9th, 2004, 08:20 pm
Double-post one post for each movement (these are replies in the topic, not actual threads... :sweatdrop:

winndich
July 10th, 2004, 11:46 am
I thought it was something like that.
Then here it is:

winndich
July 10th, 2004, 11:47 am
the second Movement.

winndich
July 10th, 2004, 11:47 am
And the third movement