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Baka-Inu
April 17th, 2006, 11:26 pm
:heh: Only in this format.... well...

Sepharite
April 17th, 2006, 11:34 pm
I like it. Very simiplistic in melody and harmony but it's nice... Do you have anymore? =D

Baka-Inu
April 18th, 2006, 04:42 pm
I have ''sdfg'' the title means nothing and it's a clarinet solo with piano, and ''erj'' , flute solo with piano.^_^

Baka-Inu
April 18th, 2006, 06:15 pm
well... Again the title means nothing.... I just wanted to have fun with FinaleNotepad...:P

fat_gamer_176
April 23rd, 2006, 06:37 pm
I like your style! My favorites were the first and last ones. Very nice, but not overly complicated. How long have you been composing?

PorscheGTIII
April 25th, 2006, 02:57 am
This seems like some good quality stuff!

Now if we can only work on your titles...:lol:

gedtag
April 25th, 2006, 04:14 am
The "^^oooo" sounds very nice. Can you record yourself singing the "^^oooo" song and post it here?

Shizeet
April 25th, 2006, 08:26 am
I'm no singer, but it sounds like you barely left any breathing room for the first song. The music itself is not too bad at all, but maybe more difficult than intended for singing purposes. Similarly, give the woodwinds some more places for breaths - easiest way is probably to cut short the sustained note at the end of every phrase, or seperate the sections further with more silence between the lead parts.

PFK
April 25th, 2006, 07:50 pm
can someone change them into a midi, thanks :)

Baka-Inu
April 28th, 2006, 06:19 am
I luv to sing that song... In wich I did errors, I wanted to type feel, not fell..... But I don't have anything to record... well... bah, A new music again... still no title... but it have a music... ¬¬... bahhhh-^-^-:heh:

skittles
April 29th, 2006, 01:23 am
oh em gee. these are really awesome! seriously, i like them, especially that piano piece.

simplicityho
April 29th, 2006, 02:42 am
a;ofdih

Baka-Inu
April 30th, 2006, 03:03 am
I'm realy happy that people likes my musics -^-^- And, I forgot to answer, I compose since.... 2 years... and, for eveybudy who want, there's a music I did for a contest,(wich I loosed because the one who was playing the second clarinet part did anythings... But I had a lot of good coments on the music!) There's 4 parts of the music, A, B, C and D. and it do A-B-C-B(up to the middle)-D ^^ the name's ''Musico Graphite''
final-A and B
finale2-C
finale3-D

BlazingDragon
April 30th, 2006, 03:48 am
Oh wow, "oooooo" is so beautiful! Man, I wish I could write like that. I love the piano part, and the oboe compliments it so well! It would be kind of akward to sing though due to few areas for breathing and such, but I absolutely love it! Amazing job!^.^

I really like the chord progression. The left hand harmony on the piano is nice too, but it seems some of the bass notes go higher than the treble notes at the same time, and right-over-left-hand in such a short interval would be REALLY weird.x_x

Baka-Inu
April 30th, 2006, 01:27 pm
The left hand of the piano part DO go on the right one >w< but it's fun to play!! ^^ bwahahahaha!

Milchh
April 30th, 2006, 09:34 pm
Hey, going to listen to your other ones later-just heard your first!

Wow! That's some good lyric writing, nothing to hold you back! I love the accomp. and melody as well. Very nice!

Very easy title for the song: "I Felt Like"

Baka-Inu
April 30th, 2006, 10:40 pm
heeheehee! An other one! This time, the title is ''fairytales'' because I just felt like doing that... ^^
And again, I did an error in the lyrics, it's ''feel'' not ''fell'' And now it have a title, ''Like if I was dreaming.''

Baka-Inu
May 3rd, 2006, 06:22 pm
:( my last music... It's the theme of one of my characters, Damien, who is a vampire. Please, I want coments on this one!!!!!!!

evafreek576
May 3rd, 2006, 07:09 pm
beautiful:cry: :cry: :cry:

Baka-Inu
May 3rd, 2006, 11:00 pm
thanks!

PorscheGTIII
May 5th, 2006, 01:21 am
That was great!

Almost sounded like it belong in a music jewlery box. Keep up the good work!

Baka-Inu
May 5th, 2006, 08:17 am
OwO you know, I was thinking about doing this music for a jewelry box!

Baka-Inu
May 7th, 2006, 04:06 pm
I aded a new part to '' the man and the full moon'' A flute one!

Sepharite
May 7th, 2006, 04:29 pm
It's alright. The beginning's melody is good but the chords that follow behind it makes it sound... weird. The next section is okay. I don't like the rhythm but it's alright for a battle -- the bass line is cool though.

PorscheGTIII
May 7th, 2006, 04:44 pm
Yeah, I agree with Sepharite. The begining sounded good but I didn't like the constant string of sixteenth notes.

BlazingDragon
May 7th, 2006, 05:30 pm
I just listened to the Full Moon one and...Wow, it was absolutely beautiful! The use of the rolling intervals was a nice touch and I really like some of the rythyms. There was so much emotion and variety there, it was great!:cry: :lol:

Baka-Inu
May 7th, 2006, 07:43 pm
>w< it's funny! some people don't like the rhytm, and other do! :heh: it mean that .. hu... well, that some people do, and other don't...:sweat:

Sepharite
May 8th, 2006, 12:46 am
It means the other half of the people are wrong ;)

Baka-Inu
May 8th, 2006, 09:02 pm
yha... something like that! And sorry, But it's not the good one! >w< heehee... here is the true ''the man and the full moon2''

SORRYSORRYSORRY!!

evafreek576
May 9th, 2006, 11:39 am
:cry: :cry: .................
that was even greater than the last:cry:
the flute descant makes it even more powerful:cry:
you know, it sounds like it could be used in a studio ghibli film
it sounds like that sort of music
you get what im saying?
beautiful:cry: :cry: :cry:
if i can write a piece half that good, ill be happy:cry:
oh yeah
i printed off the first version of the man and the full moon
im playing that on the piano
it sounds so cool and so fun to play
thank you, sensei

Baka-Inu
May 9th, 2006, 09:06 pm
Sensei??! Ghibli!?!!?! I... just can't belive it!!! >w< wow!!^.^ thank u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!! *hugs u to death*

PorscheGTIII
May 10th, 2006, 02:25 am
It sounds nice. I think it sounds better if you make the flute part play softer (P 'ish) and the Piano part play louder (mF 'ish).

evafreek576
May 10th, 2006, 12:50 pm
i meant it:lol:
seriously^_^

Baka-Inu
May 13th, 2006, 12:03 am
yep I know..., fur the piano and the flute, but I'm too lazzzzzzzzzzy to change it >.< And thanks again! I'm working on a new piano piece right now, but it's harder to write than to play! >_<

Baka-Inu
May 14th, 2006, 06:25 pm
>w< this music's wierd!

evafreek576
May 18th, 2006, 09:30 pm
agreed:lol:
its good..ish.
i may have my sights too high after "the man and the full moon"

Jordan
May 19th, 2006, 06:18 pm
:drinking: :china: :kfloat: whoever wrote this music is really good!:ghost: :ghost:

Sepharite
May 19th, 2006, 07:12 pm
Your chords are somtimes a little jumbled and too dissonant for my taste... the melody is odd at times with the triplet - and the rhythm is somtimes inconsistence. I'll specify the bars later, but keep working on it!

Jordan
May 20th, 2006, 05:37 pm
Your chords are somtimes a little jumbled and too dissonant for my taste... the melody is odd at times with the triplet - and the rhythm is somtimes inconsistence. I'll specify the bars later, but keep working on it!
true, i haven't thought about that:heh:

Baka-Inu
May 22nd, 2006, 12:18 am
At first, I wrote that music and in second place, I'm workin on something that's not wierd like this one >w<' Well.. it'll be a song, but only in french, cause I'm french and sometimes like to speak in it!:lol:

deathraider
May 22nd, 2006, 01:41 am
I couldn't resist:lol: I bet you won't mind too much. I didn't change anything, I just made the instruments more real.

One_Winged
May 22nd, 2006, 08:52 am
the man and the full moon was the first of your pieces that I have been able to listen to. I really like those piano rolls, they are what makes the song in my opinion. one thing I dont like is that the flute just seems to randomly skip within the key in parts of the faster bit and that sounds like you are just filling out the chord with flute notes... nevermind the comment on the flutes, after closer listening it does´nt seem that way at all.

Baka-Inu
May 22nd, 2006, 06:16 pm
thankyuuuuuuuu >w< u can do it with all of my compositions!

deathraider
May 22nd, 2006, 07:03 pm
Well, if I have time I might. I just really liked the way that one sounded with GPO.

I just have one comment on that song, though. I think some of the consecutive repeated notes in the flute part could be tied so that it makes the part smoother.

evafreek576
May 22nd, 2006, 07:09 pm
deathraider, THANK YOU!^_^
baka-inu, i don't mean to be rude, but how old are you?
and have you taken any music theory classes?

EDIT:found your age on your profile
darnit, youre too good for yur age!
please say you are either a pianist or have music theory

deathraider
May 22nd, 2006, 07:14 pm
Me? For what?

evafreek576
May 22nd, 2006, 07:35 pm
Me? For what?

the mp3 of "the man and the full moon"! i LOVE that song!

Baka-Inu
May 26th, 2006, 01:08 am
^^- hehe making me blush!

Baka-Inu
May 26th, 2006, 01:10 am
ho, I'm a pianist, and I take class since near 9 years ^^