Hello, I'm bitterduck. I mostly came here to see how my music stands up in this kind of forum. I'm from the youngcomposers forum, so this should be interesting. As to show i'm not only interested in my music, I reviewed two pieces for people. Please tell me if those reviews were harsh because if so i'm afraid our relationship might be cut rather short.

Anyway, here is a short piece. It's the first movement in my suite of a's

I wrote it last year because I drank to much cream soda.

This sounded kind of monotonous, despite a valliant effort with some elaborate counterpoint variations.

As far as your other posts go, it looks like you kind of went after the green composers, but whatever. And I never suspected that you were "only interested in [your] music," until you said that you reviewed two other pieces to prove the contrary.

You're right, it is a monotone. This might have something to do with the fact that the piece has no dynamics at all. Merely a thought though. Besides that though, got anything helpful?

Also, if you want to, link me to your music.

Yeah, I'd add in some contrasting passages. Go for some modulation, get into some major keys. It's a good idea--don't get me wrong. It was just a little monotonous. (and I love how that word has four o's in a row. It makes sense.)

There's a link to my composition thread in my signature. Do yourself a favor and don't listen to the stuff early on in my thread. By the way, I just joined Young Composers under "Michael."

Wow cool song. Yeah as said above, monotonous. But the rythum is good. So is the melody.

those chords get kind of boring after a while, try to implement some variations there.

Once again, it's boring, but I still think it's an awesome song. Great job. :thumb:

I agree with one winged that there should be more variations. Try to play with the rhythm.

The last words I said to myself was, "In The Hall of the Mountain King". It was cool.

You think so? I saw no such resemblance. There were frequent times in the song where I would have preferred a different direction for it to go in. There simply wasn't enough variety. Despite all that, though, it was a mediocre piece. Nice use of strings.