Here is my first composition:

http://www.finaleshowcase.com/showcase/upload/S0034300.MUS

Tell me what you think.

Oops!
I forgot to rename the file!
Oh Well.

For a first compositions, why are you using Cb major? XD

Anyways, it reminds me of one of those pieces from the beginner books. But since this is your first composition, I think it's a great start. You have a good sense of rhythms and chordal figures - it definately isn't Mozart but it is a great start!

What's your age, btw?

My Page is Supposed to be for my flash movies But i didn't get time to upload and link them yet.

oh and i'm using Cb major becausewhen i set it up i just clicked next
btw im 12 and i suck @ writing music

How Do I Make My Songs Longer?
I'm Gonna Improve It.