hey i just joined this forum .. hope to get real good comments from u guys here ! thanks !! anyone adept at jazz piano ? gimme some tips if possible ... anyway i am just a grade 5 pianist, so guidance would be grately appreciated ... and i am also a noobish songwriter/singer ... i hope to upload some of my songs but i am not sure if it is allowed in this ichigos forum ...

ya and i have attached some of my compositions here ... hope to have ur precious comments ... thank u !

Those songs are awesome! I absolutely love Starfall, and Majesty gives me such a warm feeling inside. I actually invision a small quaint village, and then the hero of the story sets off in search of adventure. Yes, I know; I'm crazy. :woohoo:

Anyways, keep it up! You're doing great, in my opinion! ^_^

yeah majestic is a nice piece. a little jumpy though. sorry im not the one to give critisism on piano pieces.

these do not sound all too noobish, thats all I can say.

I actually invision a small quaint village, and then the hero of the story sets off in search of adventure. Yes, I know; I'm crazy. :woohoo:


yeah majestic is a nice piece. a little jumpy though. sorry im not the one to give critisism on piano pieces.

these do not sound all too noobish, thats all I can say.


MARLON:haha i feel the same way when it turns major ... its like in some mediviel time ? did i spell it correctly ?

ONE_WINGED:haha thanks for ur comment ! it is greatly appreciated ! ill try my best to improveeeeeeeeeeeeee ... ^^

medieval

It sounds good, but it sounded like you were using a synthesizer, and the synthesizers didn't do justice to the songs. Sometimes there were repeated notes withing the songs that kind of bothered me, and sounded...bangy.

medieval

It sounds good, but it sounded like you were using a synthesizer, and the synthesizers didn't do justice to the songs. Sometimes there were repeated notes withing the songs that kind of bothered me, and sounded...bangy.

wad do u mean by repeated notes ? mistakes or the song itself ? or u think i should have more variations to my song ...

No, there were just some notes that you played over and over again, you just put them within different chords. Does that make sense?

ya k ... kinda too much repetition in a way ? maybe add more variations to my chords ?

New piano solo ... its an impro. piece so dun be too harsh !

Wow, for an improv, your mind must work really fast for you to pull off what you did!

thanks for the compliment but it is actually not my fast mind ... its not really difficult ... because its just kinda like playing gibberish on c major scale ... some times i just add in a g# note .. i just din noe it could like sound not bad ... lols -.- ...

I really love your style of composition, and your improv. is amazing~ The way you write your songs is exactly the sort of music I like to hear... strong tune that develops over time, and it's not sort of... heaped under all these extra notes, it gets to the point. I liiiiike it.
Keep going. =D

Oh, YEAH! That's an improvation. :lol:

I can tell that you had some chord patterns before? It just seemed like they were planned-unless you were like clear-minded and doing that-good job!

Geezz.. I need to make a Post your Improv thread.

I have some.

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Anyway, good improv. And i'll listen to your compositiions now!

EDIT: OK songs. Keep improving. (Not improvising)

I really love your style of composition, and your improv. is amazing~ The way you write your songs is exactly the sort of music I like to hear... strong tune that develops over time, and it's not sort of... heaped under all these extra notes, it gets to the point. I liiiiike it.
Keep going. =D


can tell that you had some chord patterns before? It just seemed like they were planned-unless you were like clear-minded and doing that-good job!


RUHINAT: thanks dewd ! glad u liked it ...

MAESTRO~: ya u were right about the chord patterns thingy ... i have this little site about composition ... ill post the site ...
http:/chordmaps.com/
there is something like a chord map there if u are familiar with it i think improv-ing should be a breeze or breezier ... lols ...

anyways ... 2 new pieces !!!

i feel really noobish now cause i dun really understand what u guys are talking about .. are u all like all into classical music and stuff ?! all those terms u yall are using in the other threads are making me like WTH ?! lols ...

When I'm feeling stupid:

http://www.music.vt.edu/musicdictionary/

righto thanks dewd !

That's a great improvisation. For me, it's kinda the same as for you, except with the C Minor scale, and they're usually a LOT slower! XD

ya thanks marlon for the compliment ... for me, i think improvising is all luck + alil technique ... i mean, sometimes u can sit there for one whole day and get nothing out of it and sometimes the moment u rest ur butt on that seat ... boom ! it just pops out ... ya .. anyways .. new compositions ... comments would be appreciated as usual ^^ ...

question ! can i upload an mp3 of myself singing ? as in my voice ? singing songs i wrote ? is it allowed ?

No it's not. In fact, I'm going to report you.

No it's not. In fact, I'm going to report you.

erm ? *raises eyebrow* am i missing something ? i am totally clueless ...

That was reverse sarcasm. Never mind I'm just bored as hell <_<

2 new pieces ... 1 piano solo, lonely winter and another song i composed with my brother .. singing about life in today's world ... recording for singing is not that clear but i still hope u enjoy them ... EEK !

Good job, hate the quality.

I liked the song you sang.

The piano pieces, there were a few odd repeated notes which made me feel like the music went off its time signiture. Also, your songs start off very nice but I get bored about halfway through it. This is just my opinion though and I can't exactly say I can do better than you at writing music anyways haha.

Some people like the oddities like that so who am I to judge. Gj, and keep it up!

haha i know .. i didnt know what to add in some of the empty parts so i tried to experiment with some chromatics but it sounded like crap .. haha .. ya sorry for the lousy quality for the song too !! ill try to record a clearer one ..

new ! after a long busy semester i am finally back with some new songs ... :heh: comments would be appreciated !!