Theme: NekoBoys/Girls, Demons, Magic, Humans

Plot: Nami is your normal NekoGirl that has lost everything. Her parents were killed by the demon tribe ChiTenji. (BloodMagic) So for almost a year Nami thinks that no one cares about her. Thats until Taki comes into Nami's life. Taki is a demon Kitty, but she is one of the few nice demons. And Nami also learns a secrete of her family/past, and why her family was killed. So now she wants to get revenge on her parents. Will Nami and Taki kill the ChiTenji tribe, or will they get killed in the process?

How does that sound. If anyone wants to help they can.

So you mean you intend to write a manga? Don't you have to be Japanese to do that? At least that's what I've always heard. Perhaps that's changed, though.

Plot: Nami is your normal NekoGirl


Sorry, you lost me there. :mellow:

Perhaps the use of NekoOni? lol. I just can't picture something with the word neko without the word "cute" (or more appropratly Kawaii~) comming to mind. Perhaps swaping out the words "Nekogirl" with Cat Demon might turn a few more heads in intrest.

As for the storyline, it seems a little serial, but it'll work for a straightforward manga. I only have one word of advise with the story: Detail. As I'm sure you know, Japanese works tend to be focused more on human (or demon, in this case) relations and how a person acts in a situation, rather than focusing on pure action like us Americans do. Think out the characters' mannorisms well, and provide a past that coincides with their current self; give the characters the depth they deserve.

Well ok it's not going to be a manga what I ment is a Fanfic ok.

Needs a big ol' warrior dude. Either as an adversery, or as the protector. Hmmm. maybe taki can change into a cool demon tiger creature. I'm just saying, your protaginist need protection in a demon infested world.

Needs a big ol' warrior dude. Either as an adversery, or as the protector. Hmmm. maybe taki can change into a cool demon tiger creature. I'm just saying, your protaginist need protection in a demon infested world.

Yup your right Taki can turn into a demon when she wants to. She is this big 4'5" demon. (Normaly she is 2"4")

4ft 5"? thats not that tall.... but yeah, the story sounds quite straight forward. btw what kind of plots and twists are you planning to add in to your story?

Well ok it's not going to be a manga what I ment is a Fanfic ok.

o.......but manga sounds so much more exciting. Not that fanfic doesn't.......but just not as much.....:huh:

but Fi for manga, XetroxIV will have to draw aswell... which is hard

but Fi for manga, XetroxIV will have to draw aswell... which is hard

I understand, but don't u find manga so much more capturing than fanfiction coz you can expand so much on character designs but yea i know........drawing is HARD..........:think:

welll no.... some fanfics are awsome!! even without pictures/drawings...it just depends how well you write it.

Well if anyone wants to help me, you can.

I think the plot could definitly use some more work. As M said. Details. Make sure the underlying scheme is something truley notable. Don't just have a single group, give them more characteristics. The boss is something you definitely wanna work on. You need an antagonist worthy of a big story.

Make sure you keep track of your setting, because how the characters use the environments is another good thing to think about. And in the demon infested world, wouldn't there be a few other small groups that either help or hinder them?

Make sure you think about these things. I may not know how to draw, but I do know what makes a good story (Contrary to my writing ability XD)

But it would make an interesting story.

P.S. Whats with the kitten fetish?

@shadow- could mean kitten Obsession, mania, craze, passion, lure, interest, fascination.... who knows what he meant tho.. XD

If you want a manga, i could draw it, after all, i do doujinshi all the time. Just gotta give me physical characteristics. Art is like the only thing I'm good at, and singing. Email me if you want me to draw characters.