eyes need alot more work and generally sort the colours out. But i'm reasonabily happy with it at the mo :)

http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/2949/FACEfin.jpg



and heres some progress

Face 01 (http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/2949/face01.jpg)
Face 02 (http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/2949/face02.jpg)
Face 03 (http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/2949/face03.jpg)
Face 04 (http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/2949/face033.jpg)

Im thinking the eyes look weird..apart form that Great Job!

The left eye looks too high and that's all you need to work on that I can see. Otherwise it is really good.

The way the eyes are placed are a little awkward but not crazy.

I love the colouring. Its professional stuff you got there.

The left eye's eyelashes are a little retarded (they just stop all of a sudden), but other than that, I'm lovin' it! ^_^

thanks guys, this all helps alot :)

update, More depth in the eyes, bought the chin up and shortened then neck :) The face is whats important to me, not shoulders :P yet

http://www.corsasport.co.uk/carimages/2949/faceup01.jpg

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I like her! ^-^ she's pretty! The no hair one cracked me up!

That looks like the malaysian style of drawing. I see alot of that style drawing in malyasian mmorpg games.

hmm.. the no hair one helped me realize that the chin wasn't slanted up enough... maybe by a few cms? the hair looks really cool though

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you shouldn't look at the reference without hair, could you guys just comment on the finished one. thanks

ooo kinda bitchy there. people are allowed to comment and be open. no need to narrow it down rus

Actually the one with no hair (mind you, you did post it of your own free will) is a good thing. This isn't anime. It's art. Meaning that hair isn't needed to aid in identifying people. By taking the hair out, you can focus more on what is important about the picture.

Yeah, M is right. It's awesome work. It's really beautiful. And people have to appreciate it. That picture was a work in progress thing. You want to get the head right before you do the hair, right? That's how it works most of the time for great artistic pictures!

I appreciate it.... >_< I hope I didn't offend you Rus... now I feel bad...

I appreciate it.... >_< I hope I didn't offend you Rus... now I feel bad...

nah, sorry. dunno why i said it so blunt. :think:

thanks for your comments guys

There's nothing wrong with the eyes. I love it. Very beautiful, and the color is very well done.

Excellent work.

There's nothing wrong with the eyes.

I disagree. Her right eye bothers me, especially since everything else is perfect. :blink: