I've slain him of course, Vrok was a weak one...anyway during our battle I had this playing in my mind, I guess after I cut off his head, I wrote the song down in finale. Enjoy

I didn't really like the intro, but it picked up once the beats started. Not bad.

The voices and the piano did not work well together in this piece I'm afraid. The beat wasn't completely off but it didn't bring anything positive either.

Ok, I got voice-only version

All you did was change the piano to voice.. :think: This composition seems both rushed and half-arsed to me.

Sorry to say, yours aren't that much better.

It's not that it's horrible, just try a lil harder on your next piece.

I'll go Bankai on you if you don't stop brownnosing to noir

Sorry to say, yours aren't that much better.

Hey I remember saying something like that when Noir7 was talking GOOD critisizm in the begining! :lol:

It's true, simply because his style is different, he assumes that what is completely opposite is actually bad and half assed, well to me, his compositions seem dissonant, random, and less than half assed. Just expressing my opinion.


Yes, I did write this song in less than 30 minutes, BUT I'm completely content with it.

Well.. long as the composers' happy; I say.

I actually like the piece except for a few weird notes at some parts i think u did a great job. It sounds very dark and sort of epic i think.

@ DarthSion: you don't have to get offended. If you post your compositions then prepare for criticizm if you don't want it then make it clear in your first post that you don't want comments

Well, first off, this is not an Aria. If you want to pin it down to classical vocal pieces it would be a chorus.

Next, the piece has little to no direction. Things just happen. It definitely has moments that sound nice, but they're placed in akward positions. The piece needs a lot more form. (This is pretty much the universal sin of online composers. Don't feel all alone. You'll get better with time.)

This doesn't make me think of jedi decapitation at all. John Williams has already got that market cornered buddy.

Last, learn to take some criticism. You want to get better, trust me. Pay attention when more experienced composers tell you things to work on. That and serious study of the masters is what's going to really improve your work. You have natural talent, but so do lots of people. You have to learn to be humble enough to see room for improvement.

Well.. long as the composers' happy; I say.

Yeah, you just won't get anywhere with that. XD

Anyways, the song was O.K. Nothing really wowed me that much, and the percussion could've been better, other than that, it was a pretty nice tune. ;)

Wow, this happens too often...I guess Noir7 just takes some getting used to. He's an...'acquired taste.' :P j/k

a little late here but... if you're gonna compose a Jedi battle song... it should be whole lot more intense than the one you post it... I mean, it's not a bad composition... but if you listen to something like "The Duel of Fate" by John T. William... it's a whole different story. I thought for a sec that perhaps I'm not listening to the song in full blast volume.... but no. I say you should add more instruments. Just... use your force man!

Williams.

Just couldn't let this thread die huh?

*Lox*