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Hey! That's really good! It has that sort of inuyasha style to it.

You did a really good job with this style of anime! It seems like you
like the more cartoon styled anime instead of on the more realistic
side, which is awesome.

Hmm, well there could be a little more detail, but in this style of
anime/manga there never really is that much extra detail in
Hair or such, so i really don't know what to say!^-^

I like how its kept simple, to the point and nice and clean. Reminds me of that one CLAMP anime too..?

I'm trying to make one like in manga, but I'm unexperienced in manga... only in anime.