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Ravelle
July 17th, 2004, 03:28 pm
Since I've visit here for a long time, I decide to be a member here.

and yea, some compositions... an old one (composed in 2000 :sweatdrop: )

Ravelle
July 17th, 2004, 03:37 pm
yet another one. newer, but still old (2002)

Ravelle
July 17th, 2004, 03:48 pm
and yet another one, composed in 2003

Ravelle
July 17th, 2004, 03:55 pm
another one, hehe.. :sweatdrop:

Piano Suite no.1 - first mvt. (2,3 and 4 is still composing)

Ravelle
July 17th, 2004, 04:02 pm
last one in this topic. A short background music.

comments and suggests are welcome ^_^

Elite666
July 21st, 2004, 01:33 am
Overall, they were all quite good.

I liked your use of the pentatonic scale in the first one. Where the violin came in it felt like the instrumentation should broaden more or just stay completely with the piano.

All I have say about the second one is great ending. It was a bit of a surprise but it didn't feel too short at all.

I really liked your use of drums in the third piece. I'd suggest trying to lower the volume on the alto and tenor sax because they really overpower the trumpet when it comes in. Also, the last chord didn't really feel like it ended the song, there wasn't any resolution at all.

In the fourth one I really like where it slowed down in the middle. Showing the restraint there really added to the piece.

If you have a .mus version of the last piece you posted I'd be extremely interested in getting the sheet music from you if you don't mind. I'd like to try playing the clarinet part and see how it sounds if you don't have the bad midi sample. Please PM me if I could get this emailed to me.

saiyuki_gaiden
July 22nd, 2004, 12:00 pm
Rough :: This song is nice and it sounds like there's the elements of chinese character in your songs. It's around the middle section and it like it. Though I'm not sure how's the song going to match the title 'Rough' but I like the melody. It's a nice composition.

Summer :: The beginning of the song, sounds more like a battle theme rather than a feel of summer atmosphere. :sweatdrop: However, after the intro, you brought in the summer mood and it's very nice ~