Angel's Down (http://home.comcast.net/~ninjaturtle/Angels_Down.mp3)

Here's the link to my new song. Unfortunately it's a rather long one and in mp3 form... So the download is about 6 MB. But I think its worth it :lol:.

The song is called Angel's Down (meaning the feathers on their wings, not angels falling or being "down") so try to think of that a little as you listen to the file.

My favorite part is the last 2 minutes, so be sure to at least listen to that part if you dont wanna sit through the entire song (6:45).

I have a few things I don't like about it, but ill share those with you guys after I hear what you have to say.

I liked it, and my sister liked it.

very nice, some of the cord jumps are slightly off but besides that very nice

It's pretty cool. The only real crticism I have is I disliked the strings in the first two minutes of the song. Their constant crescendos into the note made the rythms sound muddy and... hesitant. Other than that, good work.

I agree the opening either had too much or too little...cant realy describe it.

you either needed more instriments for the into or a much less synthesised into....sorry form my random mumbling

I cant hear it cause the link is broken.
Can u do a different way so i can her it?