Whee~ I composed these when I was 12.. >_<

They are both pretty short.. the first sounds like a prelude to something.. but my trail version MidiMaker died on me so I can't add more D:

And does the second one sound too plonky? o_O..

Please.. listen and rate? ^^;; I am newb.

Like you named them: random. The orchestrations are weird, the chords are awkward, not melody, but it's okay, study music further. ;)

The first song was freaky! It started off fine, but then it seemed as if every instrument clashed or something. The notes didn't go well with eachother.

The second one was better, but again, a lot of chords and notes didn't go well with eachother.

You can get way better, though. That's for sure. 'Cause despite the fact they both freaked me out, lol, they took me into some RPG world. Not a pretty one, but hey lol. Kinda like invisioning a nice town at night, but then...an evil cave, and someone dying XD.

Just work some more and I'm sure you'll get better.

We the second one is the better of the two...

they both have potential.