Okay... this... I really honestly think I did well on. I'm trying to fix the last one... but it may take awhile :heh: Anyway...

It's for a character of mine... her name is Kichi. She awakes one day with a head full of memories, and lives a lie. She was created to take the place of Kagome (no, not from InuYasha -_-), who died trying to save the one she loved. Kichi... as well as Kagome's friends, truly believed she was Kagome herself. And Kichi went on to love Kagome's love, Akeno. However, she finds out that she isn't Kagome... that her love for Akeno... her memories and life... are all someone else's... and she sets off to find her own life. This music is... what I think would be along the lines of something playing during the scene she found out so like...

Enjoy... or not... whatever ^_^

You shouldn't create more than one thread for your compositions... But it's okay, and for your piece, it's too grey, dull and the harmony is really weak. :\ Well, I guess you should read more about music theory and all that... Good luck. ;)

You shouldn't create more than one thread for your compositions... But it's okay, and for your piece, it's too grey, dull and the harmony is really weak. :\ Well, I guess you should read more about music theory and all that... Good luck. ;)

Well... I create new threads... because I'm only making these two.
And... my friends, my family, my music teachers, and the people who actually... -play- my games... like my music ^_^; The reason I posted these last two... was to see how people act.

My friends are total losers, though. Saying 'they only say it's bad because it's better than what they do.' But... I have to smack them because... -I suck- And I'm quite aware that I do. But, as long as it sounds good in the ears of those who play my games... Then I'm fine.

Well... I create new threads... because I'm only making these two.
And... my friends, my family, my music teachers, and the people who actually... -play- my games... like my music ^_^; The reason I posted these last two... was to see how people act.

My friends are total losers, though. Saying 'they only say it's bad because it's better than what they do.' But... I have to smack them because... -I suck- And I'm quite aware that I do. But, as long as it sounds good in the ears of those who play my games... Then I'm fine.

Crap... that sounded so bratty. Sorry, I didn't mean for it to come out that way. :heh: What I mean to say is that... I know the music isn't very good, but it sounds good enough to the people around me, that I can put it into my games and not have to worry.

Crap... that sounded so bratty. Sorry, I didn't mean for it to come out that way. :heh: What I mean to say is that... I know the music isn't very good, but it sounds good enough to the people around me, that I can put it into my games and not have to worry.

LoL. Well, I'd advise you don't settle with where you're at. You can be much better, so aim for that; don't just stay where you're at.

In the song, anyways, it was rather monotonous, and the harmonies need lots of work. It could also use a really catchy theme, or at the least, hook. ;) Keep it up.