Hi , im pretty new to this site but i wrote a song like really long ago and i added in orchestretic instuments to help the piano out :lol:
so if you wanna tell me what u think i'd like any comment so i can make it better or something thankx ^_^ though i listened to it on finale 2006 it sounds really bad due to all the vibrato the instruments use . It sounds realy awesome on finale 2003 where the instruments are just stacato. :sweat:

OMG Did I hear what I just hear? You tormented the string quartet into cheap fiddles they sell in flea markets. x_x The chords are dull, it hardly changed, the orchestration was bad (since I assume you don't know how to use double/triple stops on the strings), there were awkward chords and mrah, I can go on for forever... But yeah, for a beginning piece, I'll only give credit to your rhythm use. Good luck, study hard on music, randomly inputting notes into finale isn't composing. ;)

umm thankx so much at least someone said it ! no more fake coments ^_^ hey what is a second third string movement? sorry ^_^

i took your advice and kept that one rythym in and took out the wierd stuff .. still it does seem wierd . thankx though ravin ^_^

I haven't studied much on double/triple stops yet, but on the Cello Part (I think- 2nd to the last staff) use divisi instead of the stops...

Needs a midi!!! Not everybody has Finale on their computers you know?

i took your advice and kept that one rythym in and took out the wierd stuff .. still it does seem wierd . thankx though ravin ^_^

It's still too bland and um... Perhaps random is the word, but it's not totally random, it just doesn't work. It's not something people would want to hear after listening a few seconds of it, make your piece simple and interesting. You lack a solid melody and an interesting harmony. Start off with more simple ensembles (like piano solo or duet or something). Good luck. ;)

It's rather repetitive and monotonous, especially with the same chord being done all the time. I suggest to start with a smaller piece when it comes to the orchestration, and start with simple, using chord progressions and those tunes that randomly pop into your head, LoL. Don't worry; you'll evolve into a very good composer as you move along!

Anyways, I see huge potential in you; so keep working at it! :lol: