Heya.

I've got some first compositions here. They're in "midi" format, so don't expect the best quality sound. Also, don't expect great dynamics either (because of my low-quality program).

"untitledbyskillz.mid" is my very first, but is incomplete. I dropped it because of lack of inspiration.

"picturesquebyskillz.mid" is my second, finished only minutes ago.

As a side note, Yiruma is my main influence. I love his music.

Honest criticism, and other comments, are welcome.

Ok melody, no development. Left hand goes awkward in rhythm from time to time. Bad key change bridge for your sencond song.

Overall, these songs are remarkable for first compositions. I think you've started on the right foot. Simple melodies with some chord progression in the left hand. Of course, I'm not saying these are great nor anything, I just think they're really good starts.

Nice job on those! ^_^

i heard a few chord mistakes in the first one, especially the last chord (i dont think anyone should end a song with a I/III chord *shudders*), but its great for a first piece ^^ i loved the part toward the end where you mixed up the melody a bit, do that more often ^^

the second song was pretty good, great chord progressions, might need a slightly lower key...

i think the two should be combined into one song, or separate movements of a song, just experiment with them, theyll come out great :)

Overall, these songs are remarkable for first compositions. I think you've started on the right foot. Simple melodies with some chord progression in the left hand. Of course, I'm not saying these are great nor anything, I just think they're really good starts.

Nice job on those! ^_^

Doh! Exactly.

I liked the second one, although the chords sounded a bit weird sometimes. Good job on your first compositions

By the way: The 2nd piece... 13 hour midi :lol: ?

Both sounds like K-drama piano BGM to me. Standard chord progression, with a soothing melody. For the 2nd piece, it sounds incomplete, u need to have proper cadences to finish the music. Atleast have a imperfect cadence.

The second song was really nice. But I just thought it lacked... uhmmm feeingl...? Some of the chords were a bit off. And I can see the inspiration from Yiruma.

Good job.