ok...i gonna try to write a song(ok, lyrics to go with Cloud Smiles...im just doing this for fun so nobody will sue me...right???). i mainly have the beginning and the end written out but not the middle.the song is about a conversation between 2 girls. One of them is going to leave for some where to live a better life, but the other girl tries to persuade her not to go(because she's scared they'll never meet again)and the last part has the girl leaving promising the other girls that they will meet again... the song goes something like this:

Flying
Flying away
Soaring away to my sanctuary

Walking
walking and running
Running to where my paradise is

(middle goes here)

Someday we'll meet again
Beneath the cloudless blue sky
Someday

Someday, we'll see each other once again
Though its far away
I promise you

can somebody give me ideas to the middle part and advice on improving the lyrics???

i think we need to actually know the song, first... anywhere we can hear it?

Sir, please. Don't make topics here and there for something that is not even different of your questions.

http://forums.ichigos.com/showthread.php?t=8034

What Mazeppa said :/