This is a new composition from me. I hope u guys like it.

For a background listen as I browse Ichigos, this wasn't all that bad.

Thing is, I couldn't really find a great development section, so really work on that.

Untill I really pick this apart, thats all I got. ;)

I think it's pretty good background music. However, what I think it needs is a switch into a more upbeat, major section like in the middle of Fur Elise.

i loved it :)

its upbeat enough, i think the major section thats been proposed should be waltz-like and dreamy, and then slowly build up, and it should be stuck in a place with the features of 1:30, where it builds up. eh, my opinion.

EDIT: i realized that an upbeat, major part would not be a bad idea, go for it ^^

I like it.

Not sure if this is a compliment, but it reminds me of mad piano hitting.

EDIT: I listened to it a couple more times because I was bored... and it sound better and better each time. Now it reminds me of a dark dungeon underground... hehe...

Oh.. I've heard the first draft of this piece, and it sounds really good :) .

nice, I think I remember hearing the first draft of this piece too. This song surprised me, posibly your best song in my opinion.

It does sound rather nice. I really like how it just kinda wakes you up. :lol: I thought it was really cool. Good job.

That sounds pretty cool! I really like it... very catchy but you overused a section a little too much. But great job!

i like it. has varying style progressing through.