Fantasy no.1 - Winter

My country doesn't have snow, so I imagine it myself.
2 weeks of composing for this work =_=

Fantasy no.2 - 雨 (Ame): Rain

I started composing this work in a rainny day. A week of composing for this work.

I'm listening to the Winter one, and I like it very much. ^^ Somehow it makes me think of mountains more than snow, but it's still a very nice piece.

Edit : The rain one, the notes in the background really makes you think of rain. ^^ En gros, two very nice compositions. :D

:D I love your songs!!!!!!!!!!!
I rate them 100/99XD!
Can i have have the sheet music to those songs.

I'm listening to the first one... Will edit later and add comments for ame..

Hm.. Since my general area has lots of snow during winter time, I tend to take it for granted. With this song, I can see flakes of frost gliding down on cool breezes in enchanted forests. ^__^ It's very pretty, and makes me want to bring up my Finale and write some music..

Okay, edit! The second one... This must be a very musical rain, since rain in the desert doesn't have this much of a classical feeling, X3. Nonetheless, a wonderful composition.

~Nyro

Winter:
it's very nice. I used to hear songs that have exposition and climax, and it is quite refreshing to hear some pieces that simply describe the nature.
However, there're some parts that I don't quite understand, say, the part that suddenly accelerates and gets intense towards the ending; it is very different from other parts of the piece - does it imply anything?

Rain:
it sounds very mysterious but somehow a bit random - I guess that's what rain does. I prefer Winter over this one, because I can't really visualize a rainy situation in this piece. Other than those it would be a very good composition.

Enhance Forest:
I also heard your CMA piece Enhance Forest, did you get your inspiration from Nyroeon? do you mean EnChanted Forest? ;)
anyways, that is a great piece, good dynamics, instrumentation and "imagery"-the ability to bring visual images to the audience through music. It sounds really pro. what software do you use to make it? it defintely has a better defined structure, and very easy to follow. Sure that's the best song I heard from you. good job! How long did it take you to compose this?

@ Winter

When I listen to this, I can honestly say I have n oclue when the song will start. I thought you made up a piano intro, but it kept going random later on when the flute was introduced. It would be better if you had a solid main part of this song, instead of making it up like this. The middle parts (~ 3 min) reminded me of snow, so that was good since it's entitled Winter. After that it went random again though. =_= It has some atmospheric quality, but as a song in overall it isn't as pleasurable as it should be.

6.5/10

@ Rain

Starts out mysterious and with a lot of good 'rainy' notes with the left hand. I sort of liked how you played a melody with the left hand and concentrated on keeping the rainy feeling with the right hand. I liked the intro, but it lost my interest at approx. 1min. Then, at 1:40, it got better again, but lost the rainy feeling to me. ;_; It had some good elements there but again, it lost my interest. Perhaps you should focus on a memorable theme for you songs, to symbolize the weather effects you're after. (I know, I keep nagging about melodic and memorable themes, so take it or leave it.) Good ending, also.

7/10