Hi everyone.

I'm new here, and this is my first post.
I started composing music a couple months ago, just for fun. Most of my music's unfinished, but heres one that I managed to complete.

Tell me what you guys think :heh:

You seem to have a pretty solid start. So great job on that, but your ending was a bit phooey.

I really liked your chord section.

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Oh yeah, and welcome to Ichigos--glad you picked us. ;)

I like it... it's simple but good.

And like Mazeppa said before me, the ending is not so well. I think you shouldn't have used that very last chord.

I'd end the song in that pre-last chord at 1:17, I know it doesn't take you back to the Tonic, but you can go back to that by the 16th notes you use at the end. ( close towards the ending you can switch to the 8th notes. Kinda a slowdown at the end. )

I disagree with the 00:34 chord. The harmony lost its interest really quick. Ends way too abrupt! The problem isn't going back to the tonic. There is no warning to the listener that you are going to end the song. You need one more decisive area to bring a close to the piece.

Really good start! :) It's really cool, and quite refreshing. I also think it's pretty original in its own ways. Cool; you're starting on the right foot! ^_^ I agree with many of the comments above (such as the abrupt ending), but hey! It's still nice for a beginning composition. Keep working on composing!

I disagree with the 00:34 chord.


The harmony lost its interest really quick.


End[']s way too abrupt!


There is no warning to the listener that you are going to end the song.


You need one more decisive area to bring a close to the piece.

KK is quotable to the max.