here it is... can all of you who listen to it edit to help me improve it and add more please, i would be really grateful :D and please comment on it i dont mind any bad comments about it. and also help me think of a name for it lol i know i am useless aren't i..

well here it is... first time i have ever tried to make something lol..

oh and ignore my other thread please.. thank you (not used to forums yet :D)

Pretty good for a beginner :) .

Try adding some pedaling, and add the right notes at the beginning and the end... it seems unusual to put a D as an ending note, when it may be in Bb Major or G Minor.

If you don't know what I'm talking about, study some music theory ;) .

thanks i do kno what ur talking about.. appreciate the comment :D

can all of you who listen to it tell me how to improve it, fill in left/right hand gaps...etc... thanks..oh and a name for it lol

edited a bit but still not finished..

There's a lot of unpleasant dissonances. And it sounds quite random, though for some reason, there's this strange sense of direction. You need a lot of embellishment to improve your piece.

lol why thankyou i like the randomness lol anywho....this is it finished (i think) not very good but oh well it'll have to do i guess