Slow....relaxing, mesmerizing.



(NO it's not a rip off from naruto) ^_^

I liked that it was relaxing... (just came back from a basketball game) but I don't really see it going anywhere. The vibraphone (?) works for a while, but not throughout the whole song. It's quite soft and relaxing to listen to, as I said...but it sounds too much of those songs that are progressing in the background, that you don't notice. It's also too short, and doesn't loop very well. A suggestion would be to lenghten it and vary the instruments a bit, or to make a better loop. (A good loop should be a loop that you can't notice at all)

I liked it, it feels like a sort of beginning to an RPG. A hometown theme before the tragedy happens that starts off the whole thing. It almost feels Golden Sunnish to me. I can see it working for a short period of time but I think it would get annoying fairly quickly.

Originally posted by Noir7@Aug 5 2004, 05:17 PM
I liked that it was relaxing... (just came back from a basketball game) but I don't really see it going anywhere. The vibraphone (?) works for a while, but not throughout the whole song. It's quite soft and relaxing to listen to, as I said...but it sounds too much of those songs that are progressing in the background, that you don't notice. It's also too short, and doesn't loop very well. A suggestion would be to lenghten it and vary the instruments a bit, or to make a better loop. (A good loop should be a loop that you can't notice at all)
Yep, basically I'm just transposing into infinity XD...

Lonely night was one of the better compositions I've heard from you d-(o_0)-b. If you would change the instrumentation, perhaps a trumpet or two, it would make a very good castle theme plus, converting it to minor would increase the "royal effect". I also sugest to make it loop, because that ending is far too abrupt. It doesn't sound finished AT ALL. A title change would be nice, also. It sounded more comforting and warm than lonely.

VERDICT

+ ~ Makes a good Castle Theme
+ ~ Nice melodies throughout the song
- ~ Ends far too abruptly; try looping

OVERALL GRADE ~ 4/5 Good