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Your first song was really really typical. It has areas that flowed okay and it had areas where it was just wrong. Your second song did not sound like it was finished. The timpani entrance was good but it exited too early. You need to develop it more. Your third song is obviously not finished. There is a lot more a piano can do, that's about all that I can say for the third song.

All of your compositions 'work', but they don't sound musical. You have the chords, and melodies right, but now it's time to make them interesting.

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