>w< And I'm going to be mean! muahaha... Well.. not realy.

I'm posting ONLY the firts part of a song I wrote called ''Rose's theory''.

I didn't wrote the lyrics cause I'm not sure yet of them .... well, >< It sounds so crappy on finale! ... -w- It'll be good once I register it. ^^- I have a CD comming soon!.. well, at least before the end of the school.

bwaaaa... constructives comments please!;)

Oh and the long part whit nothing at the begining is for a spoken part.

And again, >< it sounds so bad on finale!

(In my opinion), the accompaniment gets boring after a while...

This is why I say it's crappy! ><' I'm unable to add any nuances with finale... so it stays like that @_@ And gets boring. humm... Cause with the voices, we only hear the piano as a ... how do we say...? well... We don't realy hear it... bla... ><' why can't I do something that looks like the real music?

Here's a better version.

One thing though: If you want to do what I did, you'll have to buy the $100 Program from Finale.

If those are voices, you have serious voice crossing, which is normally a no-no. Also, take out one of the repeats of the intro. There's really not much of a chord progression either, which, unless you have a super melody, is bad.

voice crossing?.... hu...

And thanks for the ...''better version'' but I think that the voices aren't loud enought in it ... In the ''real version'' we near only hear the voices. -_-' well... I can't make you hear it untill I record it. fu... And for the chord progressing, this is only the first part. but I can't make all the parts in one, and I don't want to submit the other ones. soooo... I'll wait till the ''real version'' is done.

ok.. In this music (Winter), I know some of the instrument can't do what I wrote, it's only for the sound. And I also know that the last part (in major) Is realy bad. I didn't know what to do, and didn't want to make the music finish in minor. I had the melody in the head and just tried to do something with it. Just for fun ... And it's not the original title.. the other one was too long ... bwaaa...

The other one (talalata ¬_¬') Is just something I have fun playing. -w- And I know it's not realy original...

Muzwik is another one for fun

The one named 0000000000000000 is a unfinished piano duet that my friend wanted me to compose, she always want to play in the same time that I do. >< Horrible ending for now! But I'm unable to write what I do when I play it...
don't pay attention to it.

xfj is The man and the full moon. I tried some ajustement on the flute so it isn't as loud as in the other version.

Sryyrs is... well, verry short :heh:

Kuro et Shiro (Kuro and Shiro) ... theme from two of my characters. repetitive (O_o I don't know if it's the right word..) yet happy :heh:

Giiiii is.... well.. a music -_-

From a cloud to the ground... I was looking by the window on a rainy day. I don't know if we can play that O-o

I just CAN'T play the one called ''a'' but I like listening to it sometimes >w<'

Voice crossing is pretty self explanatory. It where the lower voice sings higher than the top voice is singing, or vice-versa.

hoo! I see! yeah... I know. It's only because there's not ''first'' and ''second'' voice. it's like two ''first" ones.

I still think it's gonna sound weird, but I guess we'll see.

yep.
;)

I love the slightly eerie feel to the melody, an the rhythms you chose for the accompaniment. Don't worry about the left hand. I have the same problem, and it's hard to keep it original while playing on the same theme. ^^;

yup! thanks!:)