I've finished part 2 of my traveler's theme, Correnia. Criticism is needed!

You should keep your songs on one thread.

sorry ^.^ I didn't want to bump it because i thought i would break a rule...

It needs more instruments. Add in some other instruments over the top of the strings giving it some kind of melody. That brings up the other point, it doesn't have much of a melody. Harmonically it's very engaging, though.