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Inuyasha_1052
April 2nd, 2007, 02:33 am
Well.....i have zero faith in myself as a composer but I finally decided to suck it up and let others be the judge of that ^_^. So I am posting two of my compositions to be mercileslly reviewed by whoever wishes too. I am welcome to all critiscism....(thanks in advance)

~Anthony~
Inuyasha_1052

*sorry for the reverb the program i use to convert midis is wierd like that*

ajamesu
April 2nd, 2007, 07:04 am
Wow, those are really good for beginning compositions, good job :) Not much else to say, because I really don't know anything about the organ, but you might want to check if all the soprano notes are able to be sung, but I don't know, maybe a (high C?) can be reached by all sopranos... If not, consider a lower key... :)

Remizen
April 2nd, 2007, 08:42 am
those are good ^^..
I like organ :P but I'm much better in Piano acoustic piano I mean

( i don't even know how to use the repeat tool in FN2007)

Inuyasha_1052
April 2nd, 2007, 09:52 pm
Thanks guys ^_^ (that makes me feel more confident about things) and Ajamesu yes that is a high C is a challenging note to hit but remeber it only takes a few to carry a higher note overtop of a hundred lower ones

clarinetist
April 2nd, 2007, 10:26 pm
Yes, very good for a beginner.

But there's a few flaws:

Kyrie in C Minor:

~With your voices, try to keep all of the voices at almost the same rhythm; just don't treat the low voices as an instrument that only plays/sings long tones. Or, at least, try to add another low voice part that has more movement. Is it just me, or did you not use any pedal on the Piano part?

Organ Sonata:

~I can't say much about this one :) .