I'v completed 2 songs.. This one is the 2nd one. Its called Flight of the butterfly. I wrote it my 2nd year of taking piano lessons. I'v been practicing music for almost 3 years now. Do you think i should make a faster second part for this piece and bring back that melody toward the end? I realize the the first part is really short.

It's really simple...

If you want to make a second part, go ahead, but I would suggest working on a new one.

I could almost be like a Prelude to the main part becuase its so simple

That's a nice melody you have there. :P

I would definitely try to expand upon it - it certainly gives that light "butterfly" feeling, and it could turn out to be a really great piece. Keep it up!

It's enjoyable, but those accels sound REALLY out of place--no matter what the song is to represent. Keep working with it, it's not without SOME potential.

I apologize for the accels.. It was kind of a last minute thing.. It would probably sound better without any.