This piece is still in the makings, but I want to know what you think... Uh...Thanks for the advice, and please don't be too harsh with the opinions... :heh: Also, I've tried this many times before, but, unfortunately...those were all failures! XD Uh...thanks again. I'll finish as soon as I get a few opinions...

I didn't mind the melody. Reminded me of Asian style music. However, I didn't enjoy the chords in the left hand - they seemed too dissonant. You should work on the left hand chords a little more; although, I do have to give to credit, It is original.

Sort of predictable (to me, at least). 3 eighth notes, then a chord... There were some chords (in 7ths) that didn't sound good...

I did finish over the weekend, however, something went horribly wrong, and the file got deleted... -_- I finished everything and fixed everything up. *sigh* Thanks for the comments, though, and I'll be finishing it again sometime this week...