(current mood: disliking the midi conversion xD)

Well I wrote it for a theory project and pulled out all the stops....I leave its judgement not to my teacher (who was examining it technically) I leave its judgement to thoose who listen.......

First movement: Moderato con Espresione
Second Movment: Adagio Cantabile
Thrid Movment Moderato/ Forcefully

standard sonata form.....ignore the terrible midi conversion and the over pedal its all my programs fault xD

I welcome any and all creative critascism both polite and impolite

~Inu_1052~

I thought this was fantastic! :lol: Very captivating - I especially liked the part with the constant triplets. There are two things I would change though:

1. At the very beginning, the opening arpeggios get rather dull - maybe shorten that section a tad?

2. Some part could use a bit more movement when they currently sit on long notes - I would consider arpeggiating these to make it more interesting.

This was very impressive - I hope to hear more from you. :)

Wow, I really liked it. And this was your first one too. Great job. Of course Im no critic, but it was great and impressive as SilverHawk said. I remember I played a sonatina one year ago. It was really fun because like yours it had three movements and they all had different feelings to them. Again great job, and keep up the good work. Remember Im not a critic so I can't say what to improve on. So just listen to these guys comments for that.

I'm not a critic either, so I can't tell you what could be improved... But I really love the feel through your sonata. I think it's wonderful and I can't help but to love it from the bottom of my heart, and that's something rare...
But I'm pretty sure there are some things that could be improved and I would love it even more, or less... Who knows...

I really enjoyed this piece, it worked perfectly in sonata format, and it was especially nice because you kept it long, which i find is sometimes hard to do. The emotions in the piece also came through wonderfully....on the other hand i'm not a critic i just really loved the song and that's what I think of it.

Thank you all for your advice and comments. I posted a few pieces before that got bumped away so i think im putting up the revised versions soon...one of thems the begining of a Mass in C-minor im working on its the Kyrie and the other is just an organ piece i wrote ^_^

I can only imagine how beautiful it sounds on a real piano. It didnt bore me at all!