Hey, i'd like some suggestions for my own compositions. I'd like to recieve opinions:

huh? How many can i attached? and how does this attachment work? :heh:

Something at the bottom called attach file

Comments: Well, I'd give you a higher rating, but the bass notes are drowning out the melody. Also, it's much too repetitive.

Verdict: 3/10
--all I really could hear was the lower notes. Due to that, it sounds like a broken record.

:neko: LOL

That's okay, thanks for the comment, it is kinda rusty

anyone likes to hear another one?

its called Hero Within, i'm not a good composer, but i compose music to express my emotions. Here is a piano midi file i attached, it may sound a bit repetitive or offtunes, but i don't know, that's why i'd like YOU'RE suggestions...

Selinity :shifty: :heh:

Yes, it's nice, but like Haku said it's very repetitive. Call-and-response/imitation is nice, but you used it all the way through the piece. There needs to be a sense of direction as well, because there's not much variation.

Maybe it's my computer, but did I hear birds in the beginning? And were you using pedal? Cause that made it hard for me to hear. Anyways, good stuff nevertheless.

EDIT: This was for the first song.