On the old thread I posted Both old and new, this one will be all new.
please listen to the songs I really like to hear your response to them...:think:

Dreamscape: this is a mellow piano solo, hope you like it...^_^


and btw check out the last song on my other thread ist good!

Good piano solo, Mr. Jag! :)

jag is me in swedish lol

Okay you said I could spam...sooo...here I am....but I won't spam that's just annoying. I really like your song, gorgeous, I felt like crying. You're a frickin genius! I wish I were as good as you!

:cry: oh, I wish I had more coments like this!!!! thanks!!!

and thanks Marlon too!

LOL No problemo! I love listening to people's music it's so much fun! You should make more!

are you kiding? I have lots in the other thread... new stuff coming on soon though....

Can't wait! ^_^

That sounds amazing, it's so touching and when the chorus plays, it gives off a sad-like aura to it

You are on of my favourite composers here! I find that you are quite versatile not just restricting yourself to one genre. I like the imagery in dreamscape. I especially admire parts at 1:10. I find the ending a bit abrupt though, you could have did a decresendo, I think.

That was my favorite song that you've composed by far.^_^

Very well done!

Any chance there will be a 5 or 9 minute Mp3 download for Dreamscape? I currently have it playing over and over on another window while I surf the web on another window heh.

Thank you all for your uplifting words!

now for something completely different,

Freds happy theme: its a composition thats really simple in its basic structure
its for a (super mario 1) type game a friend of mine is working on...

Freds happy theme (NES): basicly the same with NES sounding orchestrating
I myself like this one better...

Struck down: you figure it out...

its a little low on the volume side:( but you´ll just have to bare with it^_^

Thank you all for your uplifting words!

now for something completely different,

Freds happy theme: its a composition thats really simple in its basic structure
its for a (super mario 1) type game a friend of mine is working on...

Freds happy theme (NES): basicly the same with NES sounding orchestrating
I myself like this one better...

Hehe, nice work with the chiptune version - you even got the four bit polyphony going on :P. I like the counterpoint between the voices, though there's a few rough transitions back to the main theme.

Struck out is fairly nice sounding too, though it's a bit more cheery than I'd imagined. I don't really like the strings in this piece, but the piano and celesta/glockenspiel really work well in combination.

most gratefull that you spoke your mind about the transitions in freds happy theme, I just wanted to see how people reacted on the mix of 3/4 and 4/4...


Aim Fire Kill: I have made this into a musical comment on certain events going on around the world...

forgot to post it....:P

We Are Dead: have you ever played castlevania? you know the banquett hall that is always the first room in draculas castle, thats the scenery, ghouls dancing, strange and simply macabre...@_@

OK I admit this is not really a new song but it is one of the best songs i´ve made... so Ì´ll brake my "only new songs" rule just this once. :sweat:

That sounded very Rareware. lol

Ooh, sounds great. Nice and... I don't know how to describe it... Vicious? Nah, that's probably not the right word. XD

Ooh, sounds great. Nice and... I don't know how to describe it... Vicious? Nah, that's probably not the right word. XD


malicious?? thanks and spanx!^.^

Yes One-Winged you did a good job. It sounds great and there are no pause, the transitions are welle done. I like the piano and in particular the left hand.
I don't think malicious is the right word. Well.. I have the french expression, I can't say it in english^^

Good to hear you liked it!

Snow Angels: this one is a slow paced song with some strings, glockenspiel and stuff. I tried to make it a little mystical...

this is a fresh one and im very proud of it...^_^

Delusions of Grandeur: its a fast paced piano solo and the only fiting name for it is Delusions of Grandeur...:lol:


oh and i know i shouldnt be double posting and stuff but i figure I´ll post em when i make em...:bleh:


Edit: I almost forgot...

Battle Ordinary: A final fantasy-inspired song, I´ve posted this somewhere else on the forum but it is a new song....:think:

Aim fire kill- a very nice kind of theme you made. I like the reverse effect.

we are dead- This song is good it kind of reminds me of a carnival?? :)
Nice percussion too.

battle ordinary- This is a nice battle theme.

You have very nice songs and I like how you sometimes change a little from song to song. :)

Delusions Of Grandeur (Fullscale):

This is the same song as the above but orchestrated with cool drums and synths and strings, its not at all the same song as the above and yet it is....

You just have to love it...:sweat:



damn forgot to say thanks for the comments.... thanks.

Sounds awkward and random-ish until about 0:23. That section starting at 0:45 doesn't seem to flow with the rest of the song... :\ Then it gets back on track, thank goodness. ^.^

Chasing the cresent moon 2:
this is the second version of an old song and this version is much better!
its a piano solo but ive added a some strings and altered the sounds and stuff.

Rumble drums: an almost all-drums battle piece I made this evening.

hope you´ll enjoy

if not, Why?

Very nice piano! I like the touch that the strings add in the background! In a couple places the dynamics were a little funny, and that's one thing that you could add more of on the piano to make this song even better! You definately have some, but adding more would give it more contrast.:)

exactly what do you mean by dynamics movement? velocity? ???

please explain this to me so that I can improve the song.

Dynamic movement in music almost always refers to VOLUME. That's all I meant by adding more dynamics, to add more drama.

thanks for the coment deathraider.
as for the volume, in the first versions it had a lot of "dynamic" but since I changed the song to try and meet Brinrae´s request for a more mellow feel I took alot of it away...

oh and I got a request for the sheet music for "Delusions of grandeur"
and here it is...^_^

Oh. I didn't even listen to the original.

To the end of winter:
I got some ideas for a guitar song and here it is 4 hours later, every guitar is played by me. maybe I´ll put some lyrics to it sometime. Ive fallen in love with this song.
what do you think?

It's pretty nice. ^_^

I like it a lot very good saturday morning lazy day music. ^_^

Before:
This is a town-song inspired by one of Klonoa´s songs.
a little harp (guitar) mellow strings and flutes....

Very nice One Winged....it makes me wanna go outside and dance in the rain....(very weird, I know)

oh thanks miranda, thats not wierd(?)
I´ve been a healthy productive human today... two songs.

Vacum: its a short strange song with some very fast guitar played by... me,
its a little untight at places. it sets of a very strange mood. think of floating in space.

i would really like some comments on this one, good or bad.

To The End of Winter - Dont quite like it as it sounds a bit weird to me. Dont really know what's the main melody u're trying to convey. Cant spot any main melody. Sorry.

Before - NICE ! ^^

Vacum - Dont like the melody at all. No other comments

To The End of Winter - Dont quite like it as it sounds a bit weird to me. Dont really know what's the main melody u're trying to convey. Cant spot any main melody. Sorry.

Before - NICE ! ^^

Vacum - Dont like the melody at all. No other comments


does there have to be a melody?

The fun part about being an artist is that you can say stuff like "its supposed to sound wierd to depict the pain of nature".
But I guess I´ll just have to stop playing the guitar...:cry:

oooooooooooooo. Dont know. Most of the music i've heard from real musicians do express main melodies in most of their compositions. STOP PLAYING THE GUITAR ????? WHY ??????????? Ur guitar skill is quite good though. =p

Real musicians?... im not gonna start that again...lol
:

Heh, I actually quite liked Vacum - it's probably my favorite from you so far, actually. I very much enjoyed the overall mood that is cast by the piece. Since melody isn't something I'm great at either, I won't complain about it in this piece, since the rest more than makes up for it ;). Specifically, the gorgeous harmonies, the live guitar part, and that subtle but effective sweeping wind sound. The only thing that I can pick at is that at parts, the music seems to "pop" a little bit; you might want to try to filter that out. Other than that, nice job, man, really nice! Keep it up.

I think you are one of the few here who enjoy those kind of songs thanks.
as for the *pop* thats an invoulontary sound witch is giving me a hard time.
I´ll trie to get rid of it....

I like this new one. Love the guitar. ^.^

Yes, I agree. It's very interesting, but if you could, you should make it longer!

nah, I think im done with that song... best not to hang your self up on one song when there are hundreds to be made, I´ll save the fine work with the songs ´till the day im employed or my muse leaves me...

Mission Briefing: this is like the SeeD song in FF8...x_x yes I know the file is spelled the wrong way, god damn my head hurts...

im gonna start making more RPG-oriented music from now on, a friend of mine thought I should do so, so thats what im gonna do...

ok ok this is´nt exactly RPG-music but its for the same game as "Freds Happy Theme"

Playfull Intro: an intro for full orchestra... almost, the brass is missing.

This is a work in progress....but I still think its damn good, agree?

Mission Breifing
This song's melody didn't really catch my attention (at all), but the drums kicked ass, I'll tell you that much. ;)

Playfull Intro
Ummm... You spelled "playful" wrong... XD Anyways, I enjoyed this song. I think it's great. :)

EDIT: I think you also spelled Briefing wrong, unless I'm mistaken, which I usually am... XD

EDIT-2: O.K. It is spelled Briefing, so yeah... I was right for once... :shifty:

Mission Briefing: this is like the SeeD song in FF8...x_x yes I know the file is spelled the wrong way, god damn my head hurts...
...

god damnit Marlon! I know!:bleh:

and maybe I was playing with the words in Play Full Intro.... no I wasnt.x_x
thanks for pointing THIS one out for me.
Im glad you liked it by the way, always nice to hear!

this one is special I got inspired by shizeet´s drums and a band called Dntel and decided I was gonna create some nice drums, it became more than that. and mind you its an experiment....its not an RPG song so once again ive broken my "rules".

whats in the song: me singin´actually (no lyrics though), a lot of cut up drums, fx and very little guitar....

and a little secret, thats me screaming in the end....

I have put up some midis but if you have the time Id rather you listened to the mp3´s

Goodness One_Winged you sure have been busy!!

I'll have to come back later to listen to all of them though.......(school won't let me play music during class V_V)

Thanks for the midis. (Download-volume problems make it impossible for me to listen to many MP3s, sadly.)

1. Fred's Happy theme: Aptly named. It's very cheerfult to listen to. ^_^

2. Struck Down: Like it. Nice tune, some interesting things going on in the harmony; interesting arrangement - nice instrument changes (string intro, chromatic percussion based melody and strings slowly coming back, then ensemble...) Well done!

3. We are Dead: Sounds like a twisted waltz. Vampires dancing through a huge hall... You said it's one you your best, and it's truly the best so far.

4. Snow Angels: Interesting. I like it. It reminds me a bit of the David Bowie/Brian Eno collaboration instrumentals of the late 70ies, only more lively. (That's a good thing, in case you don't know. ;) )

5. Delusions of Grandeur: Wow, that one really makes me want to listen to the MP3. (I may sometime when I have leftover MBs.) Lots of things going on, the main attraction is the rhythmic movement. That would be great to hear life, actually. (Piano songs are hurt most by the midi-format, methinks.)

6. Battle Ordinary: Nice, fast paced piece. Perhaps a bit too ineresting for a battle theme in a game, though; on the other hand, why not?

7. Before Everything: So soothing... Nice harmony. Probably my second favourite so far. (after We Are Dead; although Snow Angels comes close. Hmmm....)

8. Mission Briefing: Fits the title well. Has that military feel to it.

9. Playful Intro: Nice one. I especially like the theme the piccolo flute plays (along with the proper rhythmic accompaniment). (I mean the one repeated for the end.)

***

I wish I could afford to listen to the MP3s. They must sound so much better! ^_^

Ohhhh... someone took the time to write alot of nice things!!!!
spanx very touch!

and yea I´ve been very productive, this is the deal: the more schoolwork I have to get done the less I want to focus on schoolwork.:heh:
I know its strange but thats how it works.

and miranda, im waiting for your spamming....^_^

hey Shizeet I would very much like a comment from you too dude,

heehee
EAT IT!!
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Oh dear I hope this doesn't get me banned.....maybe I should give some creative critisizing, but I can't exactly listen to the music yet, I promise I will after school...and maybe I'll spam more a bit too

Disoriented is pretty cool. It's unique and I like that. Was that really you singing, btw? X=

Disoriented is pretty cool. It's unique and I like that. Was that really you singing, btw? X=

no it was you!:P

I didn't hear any screaming.....

no it was you!:P

Huh? :huh:

dont take everything I say seriously marlon...:lol:

the "screaming" was refering to singin lousy with lots of fx on it..:heh:


and look what boredom can do to a person.
not quite spanish: this song was created in minutes and it suck... hairy balls... with mustard. Its these songs that make me want to quit making music.<_<

now dear friends im gonna go out and get "pissed" as they say in some corners of the world...x_x

I really like the percussion. I'm not the biggest fan of the chormatic scales the guitar makes. It sounds out of place. Other than that the harmonies are good. It doesn't have a really strong melody, but I don't think it needs one. Once again, the precussion is excellent. The very last bit sounds like the bass guitar playing in the "Seinfeld" theme song. Maybe if you didn't have it so low it would sound like that. Overall I think it's pretty good.

oh im glad you found something you like about it! I have´nt... its really just a boredom thing.... and I dont really hear the seinfeld theme in this...

well. This track is not too bad . One question ! Why u use that clap sound as a beat? Cant find that instrument? uhm, what izzit called again? Forgot the name >.<

I really haven't liked your most recent songs...but I kinda liked "Playful Intro". It was nice to hear a "sorta" full orchestra song like that. I would like to hear more piano solos from you ^_^.

well. This track is not too bad . One question ! Why u use that clap sound as a beat? Cant find that instrument? uhm, what izzit called again? Forgot the name >.<

The clap the most "spanish" sound I could find... and I think it is called clap.
and yea it is bad *fishing for sympathy*

I really haven't liked your most recent songs...but I kinda liked "Playful Intro". It was nice to hear a "sorta" full orchestra song like that. I would like to hear more piano solos from you ^_^.
actually I was thinking of making a piano solo... you have any ideas for a theme?

MASSIVE HEADACHE!!! GAH! too much....sooo early in the morning xD

here miranda its yours, HEADACHE:P

It's too bad I know nothing about composing, otherwise I would have handed you constructive critisism that actually counts...:P
Anyway, I like your 'not quite Spanish' except for that video gamish roll... I've listened to every single one of your songs, though, and I think I like Chasing the Crescent Moon best. Talking about a piano solo, how about you try another piece like Chasing the Crescent Moon? Something in a similar genre, I mean.
(P.S. - I didn't hear any strings in Chasing the Crescent Moon 2. Could it just be volume problems? :heh: I think you should try weaving a violin into it. It sounds wierd, because it's good as it is, but you never know, it might become better)

You really listened to all of them????!!!! damn that must have taken some time... thanks!:)

the strings in chasing the cresent moon 2 are really hushed but they are there, try listening with a lot of volume....

I dont know what the solo piano will be but I´ll take another chasing the cresent moon type song into consideration...:think:

Hooray! a song! for me!!...this one isn't a headache though, I like it a lot....the begining makes me feel like dancing!!

actually I was thinking of making a piano solo... you have any ideas for a theme?

Hehe, as it happens, I've plunged a lazy little 8 bar melody on the piano today. I'm no good at the piano, and I've punched it into my composition program as fast as possible (with a mouse!), so the midi sounds even more boring, but you're welcome to ignore... er... use it. ^_^

OK here it is, a song based on that stuff that Dawnstorm put up...

the mp3: mainly Piano, half the song is fully orchestrated...^_^

the midi: only piano:\

please take the time and listen to the mp3, its so much better.



and if you comment on it please come up with a suiting name for it...
or should that be dawnstorms job?.... whatever

Wow, that sounds sooooo much better than anything I could have come up with!!! :D

As for names... my job? You're talking to the guy who names half his stuff after chords, and has a file named "I'm stuck" in his thread, because he didn't know how to go on.

(And, yes, I listened to the MP3, too; couldn't restrain my curiosity.)

Whoa... That was really good!

I have no contructive critism to add.

come on now, come up with a name

Untitled(first one): I like the feeling of how swift it feels. You did well with everything. Especially around 01:29. I don't like the strings part though( also around 01:40 ).

I really liked that piece... it has a more complicated chord progression that doesn't always use things that fit in one key, but you managed to make it sound really good. I liked the syncopation and arpeggios... It makes me want to play it. Good job, one winged. 7.5/10

I just have to say its quite easy to get away from the original scale, the hard part is finding a neat way into it again...:P
thanks for all the posts, im glad to see you didnt hate it!

Widows song: a slow song that makes me depressed...

A name suggestion is, "Capturing the Light Fairy" because it is like a dance (hence the fairy part) or like light streaming from the heavens (hence the light part) and then gets a bit darker towards the end, where the orchestration is.

How can we hate any of your songs? :P I think I didn't like the song about the computer trying to rid the virus, but I didn't hate it.

Window's Song- I'm kind of a sucker for the oboe--especially in slow, graceful melodies like this. Eh, I don't think the drum-set really fits.

Untitled- Oooo. I just got to the part with the cello. Also, I'm a sucker for the cello. Nice entrance of the orchestra. I wish we could have heard more from the orchestra!

Both pieces have really interesting counterpoint and rythyms on the piano, but lack a solid melody or structure. Overall I think it's quite promising!

EDIT:
I suck at naming pieces after they're written, as evidenced by my "Tortoise's March to and Triumphal Return from Battle." If I had to come up with a name, it would be something ridiculous like, "Search for a Title."

Ah, the Widow's Song flows very nicely. Very nice. Porbably one of my favorite of your pieces. ;)

I just got an urge to create something big, so I did... with big I mean lots of instruments.

The shadow of the emperor: He/she isnt a very nice person... but maybe he is being manipulated.

im gonna make an mp3 out of this but thats going to take some time to get right, I´ll post that later on

It sounds very RPGish, which is probably what you intendid. I do kind of get lost in the music, though. The melodies and structure are intangible almost to a fault. But points on the orchestration. Your instrument combinations have good color. I especially like how the strings would kind of punctuate certain phrases.

ok here is the mp3 of the shadow of the emperor...:)

I added alot of stuff to it... but im not fully satisfied. you be the judge.


nope sorry ive tried to upload the file like 1000000 times now but it just says..
"upload of file failed"

Yeeeeessssss!
I made it smaller and that helpt.... so here it is finally

I like the song. It's very "tense," in a good way. :)

what did you think of the fast "Tango" stuff in at the end?
first time doing that.

well this one is an experiment.... once again... nothing fancy, could be fun to hear what people have to say about it though, now is your chans to really hack away at me.

It sounds like BG music, and if it is, I like it. I also liked the melody at about 1:04, although the beginning of that part sounded like that Madonna song. XD And that ending wasn't that good... :unsure:

If it's not BG music, then... :heh:

well fortunately I also think it BG music nothing more, did you notice that half of distorted guitars were synthetic b t w. found some really cool sounds and as I stated above its just an experiment with some new sounds. the bad part about those sounds is that they are very cpu-power consuming.

oh and madonna huh... I didnt know you were into her. lol

this is what happens when I have nothing to compose for...

please give me some directions or a scenery, I would love to compose something RPG-ish so will you help me?

and here´s another completely meaningless but fun song....

I'm not into Madonna, I just remember hearing Hung Up and it sounded like it. XD

BTW, I like the two new songs. Especially the second one. If only it were longer... T_T

Hah! That new song Groove-NES has Zelda Sounds in it.

Good remix on that... well not remix, but you know what I'm getting to.

Hmm... I've never listened to your entire repertoire, but all of the songs I have listened to are decent. For some reason, all of them sound as if something is missing; I don't know why or what that is, but everything is just so... mechanical. :| However, I feel that you would make a good video game composer-- by no means the next Nobuo Uematsu (though you can certainly work up to that), but maybe the next Tommy Tallarico, one of the more successful American video game composers. ^^

not even the next Koji Konjo :P

Hey!!! whats this? pick on the genious day?!!:(
I want to be the next nobuo.... bu hu hu:cry:
just kidding :) but its tough to hear...



Can someone please give me a scene to compose for, like:

two lovers sitting under an appletree
or
a battle with a dragon
or
funny animals having sex in basket full of thistels??????

dissregard the last one....

Sure... Eh... When you just realize you have no friends; those are usually bitter times. x_x

Since I've been in a video game mood lately, and you seem to want something fast-paced, how about a battle theme for a fight between a magician and a shadow creature, set the throne room of a castle (empty except for a golden throne), theme color is gold? The magician is best at light magic, so add little bits like rays of light suddenly bursting through. The shadow creature is very reckless and uses brute force. Add a mini victory fanfare at the end (or a game over tune) too!
(P.S. - you asked for ideas. Don't complain :P)

Sure... Eh... When you just realize you have no friends; those are usually bitter times. x_x
Nah, I aint gonna comment on that....



Ruby wisdom, I think this could be usefull.

Sorry One_Winged...I feel the urge to spam...and you gave me permission =p Soo here I go....spamming on about nothing...cuz that's what I do best ^_^ I think if it weren't for the ability to spam I would go outsane (yes outsane...it's my word you can't use it!!) Oh...umm....spamming yes! LOL Ooo I know a scene that you can use for your tunage.....how bout something monotonous? like a really lazy day at school...or laying under a tree with the sun shining brightly...something like a light melodic tune.....like a sweet spring morning....Oooo I'm inspired now!

??

I'm gonna have to agree with Ureshii Gaki. I picture your songs like a hamburgur. There's just something missing from it and it doesn't taste right.
The cheese perhaps?:P Cheeseburger...

But seriously, I don't know what you're missing. Well, I do, just can't put it in words. I don't usually speak my thoughts you see, so I'm inexperienced when it comes to transferring thoughts to words. :\

??

I'm gonna have to agree with Ureshii Gaki. I picture your songs like a hamburgur. There's just something missing from it and it doesn't taste right.
The cheese perhaps?:P Cheeseburger...



the fact that some of my pieces can be hard to digest I am fully aware of and that they may "taste" strange I consider a complement, otherwise I could just start making regular pop-music that is produced not to invoke a feeling but to make the listener buy more trash and induce a larger profit, but a burger!? that hurts!


I´ve been trying to post a song but I keep getting error messages...
It`s called "Sin Of Angels"
well if you want to hear it just let me know over MSN.

Here´s one song that I like just because it is´nt a pretentious piece, it is a cartoon chase. I kind of see russian kalinka dancers in it to I dont know why.

This was a very different song. I like it, although I hope it's unfinished, because that ending is really abrupt.

´tis supposed to be a loop of some kind...

Very creative song! I love it! :P

I see foreign dancers in it too. XD Try making the other song smaller again? (it is possible?)(am I making sense?)

making "Sin Of Angels" any smaller is virtually impossible without making it sound crap... sadly.

WooHoo! nice comments!

In particular, it seemed very, very, way, too, very, way too simple for anything of any sort actually.

It seemed like you just got a 1-2 measure melody in your head, and wrote-not random notes-oddening placed notes.

If that made any sence (which it probably didn't) tak it into consideration.

I feelt that I had to post a tune so this is one I made a couple of hours ago.

oh yea the 8 in the file name is how many times I´ve made it smaller and tried to fix of some strange stuff that sounds a little...off.

hope you´ll find it pleasing to the ears anyway.

one more thing, this is obviously the max sized file I can post

The melody seemed samewhat random, and I felt like it needed more to it. The effects and stuff were cool, though. How did you get it to upload, though?

there seems to some invisible limit for how big a file you can upload at about1,5 mb...

and yea I agree, there is no real effort behind the melody.

I composed a song which was based on Final Fantasy VII Main Theme, Sky Theme and Coin Song. It took quite a while to compose it and plus it's for my GCSE music coursework and I can't get it back until summer.

It's called 'Finally, we see each other again'

??? so what has that to do with me and my compositions???

do I know you???????????????????????????????

BTW, I the limit says it's 5 megs, and my song is only 3.4 megs.

I know but the only song I can upload are around 1,5 MB

Here you have my interpretation of a popular theme I´d really apreciate some comments on this one...

I know I haven't visited this site in awhile but I'm really liking what I'm hearing right now. Especially in the beginning where everything sounds so mysterious and uncertain. I didn't mind the repetition of the piano. And when the pizzicato violin(?) came into play it was just smooth and recaptured my attention. very nice.

Interesting piano work - the progression reminds me a lot of Philip Glass' stuff. The orchestration style sets it apart, however. For the most part, I think it works alright - I'd liked the drums to have been softer and more or in background (or not there at all), and more expression overall from the instruments, but other than that, it's a pretty solid piece.

That's the first song of yours I ever heard... I remember it... It's good. :)

thansks for the comments on Night! if I take away the kettle drums then I´ll have to put in something else to fill the void... and im a lazy person.

and yea "Night" is not a new song but I made some changes to it, and I havent posted it before so it´ll have to count as a new one...

this however is brand spankin´ new.

ohh.. it has no name because when I started composing it I had an Idea and a name for it but since it changed so much from that original idea... you get the picture.

some will like it and will not, I wonder what the ratio will be...

and if you have a good name for it that would be great.

Sounds dark... :think: I didn't quite like the speeding up thing... I think it sorta loses itself after a while.

It's "O.K." I guess. ;)

you will have lots of things to complain about in this one...
not that I think its bad or anything, some things are just not as conventional as some people would like them to be.


bla bla bla here it is!

hmm... you have some time to spare listen to both and tell me witch one is better.

New piece - I like the harmonies on the piano - sort of done in a exaggerated tone to fit some theatric/cinematic setting. The fake sounding sax was pretty annoying though... completely took away from the mood. Even if you don't have any better sounding sax samples, try to do more with it - use swelling dynamics and add a bit of modulation here and there to give it a more humanized feel.

Game Clear - I didn't like the mood in this one as much, though the filtered drums version sound more interesting to me. But the drum track really needs velocity variation - it sounds too mechanical right now.

OMG I'm obsessed with "Night"

SO AWESOME!

<3 LOVE IT!

New piece - The fake sounding sax was pretty annoying though... completely took away from the mood. Even if you don't have any better sounding sax samples, try to do more with it .

thats a clarinet....
well íts nice to have someone comment your stuff anyway.

miranda thats one of the nicest things you could say to me...:cry:

Mmm... The "Game Clear" song had its moments, but overall, it didn't grab my attention. Good, though. :)

thats a clarinet....
well íts nice to have someone comment your stuff anyway.


Lol, now that you mention it, it does sound more like a clarinet :heh:. Still, it's really rigid sounding - a passage like that should really be very legato-ish. Try to use a clarinet sample with less harsh of an attack.

Im quite proud of this one though it has its flaws--

Red Leaf

its mainly distorted guitars and stuff.
-there may be name-changes as it is not complete yet...

Like you said, it has its flaws, but it's incredible (to meh, anyways)! :punk:

This could very well be a great rock song! Just needs vocals... :shifty:

Woah...that hits the spot, man.

The beginning was a little monotonous for me... The general rock song usually starts strong-- not necessarily loud and in-your-face, just solid and memorable-- and keeps the momentum going, and this definitely didn't do that in my opinion. The melody was a little poor and bland; I just listened to the track twice, and I'd be hard pressed to hum it back to you-- absolute pitch or no. I'd suggest working to make the beginning a little more interesting from the get-go and tinker around with the melody a little. On the plus side, however, the track was mixed very well. ^^;

just because your average rocksong starts out strong doesn´t mean thats a rule, that you have to obey. and I´m quite fond of breaking rules. As for the melody I´m thinking of adding som lyrics to it later on, and that will probably be more memorable.Critique is always welcome as it adheres to progress.

hmm I have a theory that im trying to implement in this song. If you have the same gain in all frequenses (ranging from 20 hz to 20 khz) it will sound nice...
and I think it does.

and remember critique and praise is always welcome.

edit: if you think of the song as the first song on a record the long intro of the piece will be more fiting

Well, it was only a suggestion. I'm quite fond of breaking rules, too, but there's some rules that you should do your best to abide by. A competent example of this logic would be a minuet: you can't legally call a composition a minuet unless it's in 3/4 or 3/8 and has a dance-like feel to it.

Hope that was a good éclaircissement.

Interesting piece. I thought it was going to be an electronica piece until the guitars came in head-on (it sounds like they have some weird flanging/phasing effect outside of the distortion - is that intentional?). Still, I guess it could be tech-rock or synth-rock, or something. As for sounding good with everything the same gain (a flat eq?)...it might sound good for you, but it doesn't guarentee it'll sound good for everyone, since everyone's monitoring setup and environment will add some sort of coloration - besides, I'm pretty sure it's impossible to get everyone perfectly flat (even on the best monitors/headphones).

there are no flanging or phazing fx on the guitars, it might be that its actually a semi-acoustic guitar...

well here is a little project I´m working on.

Many of you may have noticed that I enjoy mixing orchestral music with electronic stuff, this one is no exeption.

I would like to know what kind of scenario this song creates in your mind,
so if you would like to tell me that would be great. don´t mind the name of the file...

I liked "My Angel" a lot. Good job. ^_^

As for "Take Off," it was good, too. Except I don't quite imagine anything... XD

seems like MANY are interested in what I compose...

but since I feel the need to post something, this one is kind of "piraty" in some way hence the name Rusty Swords. If you have a choice listen the mp3.

thanks Marlon... by the way your imagination sucks :P
oh and I´ll do a follow-up on "my angel" some day when I get in the mood...

Good Job on Rusty Swords there. You got the piratey theme in there nicely. To make it better, however, you need the "aaarrrgggg" and eye-patch, peg-legged etc. etc. - to make it come alive more.

lol, I actually made a song where I recorded an -ARRRG- but I gave that to Miranda, its hers to post if she wants to.

Someone I know is making a game with the theme: war, this has inspired me to make some war related tracks

Aftermath: a short orchestral piece that describes the effects of war. I dont see this as finished, more of a work in progress you might say.

Mmm... It's not one your best pieces, but it'd work well as a BG music, me thinks. ;)

On Red Leaf, I loved the intro. It really built up to a powerful song. But I think you gotta make the entrance at 1:00 much stronger when you jump into the guitar stuff. It's almost disappointing because you are expecting a huge jump into the melody. Basically you can do this by adding much more drums. Get some crashing cymbals in there and some snare smacks. Just put a louder rock beat in the background. And add more bass. I think it's a great start, keep going with it.

thanks for the input, both of you.

That was pretty sweet. Needs a lot of bass though, but really good so far. Keep it up!

tank juice!

this new one is a lovely abstract piece. I should have posted it like 5 days ago but I was bussy moving.

I like the dramatic effect. Good use of dissonance. Short and impactful to sum but I was tricked by your song title, I thought it would tend to the more graceful styles and POW!

lol, thank you but I have to say, that song was my personal april fool....

lol I get it! :duh: What was it supposed to be an abstract of, since you said it was abstract? Was it supposed to be of butterfly wings, REALLY?

A little too abstract for me... x_x

Hey! just wanted to give all of you a warning...

back your shit up!!!
or you´ll be sorry.

my Hard drive crashed big time and I have been too lazy to backup my works, so now im trying my best to restore whats left of it...

by the way "Take Off" is the favourite of my song so id like to hear more views on it from you all.

Yeh, that sucks - I've lost a couple of MIDIs from a HD corruption, though the worst was when I've accidentally deleted my own file, thinking it was a redundant copy (well, I still have the MP3, but I never got to truly finishing it). It was actually one of my personal favorites, too, and I still regret it to this day - what I wouldn't give to have it back :cry:.

But because of that, I've decided to find places online to host my music, as well as set aside a seperate partition for my music (as well as never deleting any MIDI files, period :P). So far, I haven't really lost anything since, so I guess it's working.

the prodigal son. I haven´t started making new music since my crash due to lack of inspiration. What I have done is I have made a version of the song "my angel" with some very nice sounds. Its kind of the same throughout but it builds and builds.
I realy need coments on this one.

:unsure: :( :cry:

It sounds very good, the chord progression is cool, the instrument choice is cool, but it's hard to recognize the melody. Maybe the volume of the 'melody' has to be turned up a bit ^.^
Also, I find it very much repeating, maybe you could add like 'bridges' here and there, which just change like the whole song.
Overall it's good, 7,8/10

It gets a little repetative after a while, but overall, I like this piece a lot. ;)

Your music is good, you span over a lot of music styles and your use of instruments is great. The software you use to record seems fantastic, and all of your pieces are above average on my rating scale =P That said, there is one major thing bugging me. None of your songs leave any kind of inpact on me. None at all ~ I don't know why that is, but now after listening to them all I can't remember any of them.

To quote you, "Does there have to be a melody?" I would say no. There doesn't have to be a solid melody, yet without it it becomes so much harder to please your audience. Sometimes you're fine without a catchy tune (like on that playful intro, would fit perfectly as background music on a donkey kong game..) but when it comes to the more dramatic pieces you'll have to drill it deep down onto the listener. The ambiance you manage to create is awesome, but that's it I'm afraid.

good luck, and remember to go for memorability.

Straw hats: this tune is set in a final fantasy inspired farming town, all is peacefull...^_^

its totaly improvised on the guitar, and then I added some guitar voices ...

enjoy and tell me what you think!:)

You captured the mood very nicely. I like the melody a lot, too. When you sneak in the harmonics (the first two times, I think; you know except in the ending), I think maybe you should have the guitar voice keep on playing so it doesn't loose itself the little it does. Great song. :)

thanks marlon, its always good to see comments especialy the nice ones.

lets see if more people will comment on this one...

Giants and mouse men:...its like two songs in one... bha. listen to it... and comment!

hmm, double posting but what the hell.

this song is quite monotonous and frankly quite bad but it gets my head bobing so...

Like you said, a little monotonous (and repetitive sometimes as well), but it was a bit catchy. :) Make some more!

I would really like to know wich one of my songs that you have heard that you like the most.

if any one of you will post your favourite that would be great!

Im back!:lol:

Its been a while since I last posted. The reason is that I haven´t had an internet connection (or even a computer) during the summer.


Well I have made a few tunes but no real hit. This one was the latest in line.
I might post the other ones too.. We´ll see.
:shifty:

Now that's retro :) It's pretty good, I don't have much to say really but I liked the sounds you used and how well they worked together.

At first, it didn't really sound that good. But nice editing and filtering and stuff. I liked it more when all the other instruments came in. Good job, and yeah... Keep it up! :lol:

That song owns!! ;)

Great comback buddy! :P

I love it!!! ^-^ Like Marlon said, when all the instruments come it=awesome!

thanks a bunch! just what I needed to hear.

Im feeling evil right now so here´s a really bad loop(?) for your listening displeasure. Piano and harp but no arpeggios...

feel free to hack away!

O_O WAH! DIRECT UNISON! A big nono x_x... Do not ever double the harp and piano in unison.... And the piano is toooooo bang-y, I can't define the chords... They're too diffused, use another soundfont...

Gee wow thats alot of critisism but I guess I asked for it. :heh:

The song in general tends to sound kinda random, LoL. :sweat:

here´s a new one. I entered this into the contest as well...

orchestral stuff with a little celtic-style in the middle.

Dust Road can be found somewhere on the forum as a midi.

hope you´ll like them as much as I do!



I have two more guitar songs on hold, if you want to hear them just say so.

OMG! I LOVE ELVEN CITY! :lol:

I don't know, I just really love the little mandolin-sounding instrument(s) and all the... everything! XD LoL. I really like it. Great job!

Thanx marlon!
too bad I got only one comment though...:think:

anyway, I´ve updated this song Showdown and added some electric guitars... why? you ask, because I got my electric guitar to work thats why!:)

I actually really really like both Showdown and Elven City. I think Showdown maybe could use a stronger, more gripping melody to make it top-notch, though.

this one is a really short choir peace.

I was basicly just trying out some sounds but it turned out nice and melancholic.
I might make something out of it someday

It's nice... but the choir sounds very synthy :) If you choose to expand on this very short tune, I think it could turn out very good.

Oooh tritone in a choir is hard to stay in tune. But I like how it sounds though. =P Maybe you should have something low in the bass.

If I get over the ordeal of using those time consuming choir samples I might make a full orchestral choir thing out of it, using sample tank is a pain in the ass though...

thanks for the comments!

"now for something completely similar"...

What Lies Beneath: this is a temple theme for an RPG or something. It could have been a little more diverse but I had trouble finding a good 2:d and 3:rd part.


One With Nature: this is an old song witch was always meant to be orchestrated with guitars, so now it is. Not just guitars though. It might get a little boring, you be the judge...

"What Lies Beneath" could've been better and a little more interesting, but I liked how you couldn't really tell what was coming next. ;) That was pretty cool. The other one was a little repetitive but I liked it a lot. It was really nice.

Overall, good job on these! ^_^

this is a strange song....
it just popped out of me in two hours or so.

I thought of someone walking through a desert when I made it.
so thats why its named Sand. its not made to depict anything...

the string trio is completed ( in other words I dont want to do any more to it).

the string orchestra on the other hand is something I really need some comments on, should I finish it? or is it crap?

I don't get the string orchestra... First off, it sounds quite choppy with those constant C staccato notes. Second, it doesn't go anywhere. I know it's short and probably something of a test, right? But anyway, it's very vague =/

yea it was a kind of test, got this massive sample library to play with... anyway. This is what it turned into.

Edit: oh yea, if you wonder what the high pitched rythm stuff is, its dubblebass slapps.
the low is timpani...

One of the string sections are rather repetitive (you know... the "ta-na, ta-na, ta-na, ta-na," etc. XD ) Other than that, the sound of the drums doesn't really appeal to me, but of course that's not your fault. Anyways, I thought it was awesome, and had really cool ideas/moods in it. Great job! ^_^

yup... here we go again.

I would like to know what you feel when you hear this song, possible names for it, and critique... nevermind the current name.

ps: I have posted alot of songs that havent been comented... if you have time to spare....
:think:

that was all I think.

That opening noise, is that you raping a violin? Seriously... I bet that's air and cluster from a violin!

The song's nice, but I would have liked a more sticky and harder beat. Also with background music as this, it's a good idea to make it loopable.

YUP! Thats me raping a violin... squeal violin, squeal!....

nah, seriously thats air and cluster alright.

loopable...hmm thats not a bad idea. as for the drums, I dont know how to make em more sticky and hard (woa that came out wrong).:sweat:

This piece is more on the mellow side....

I downloaded the MIDI version, and listened to it a few times, and some parts are quite nice (really nice actually), but then some of the notes that followed kind of disappointed me... But overall it's pretty nice, though I think the title is a wee-bit little unfitting, but it's just my opinion. ;) Good job.

Lol, that PvP piece sounds like something from a TimeSplitters game--the chords and the ffeling from it, that classical-techno-game music.

I love it a lot. Might put it on my MP3-and it ha sa good looping point as Noir7 suggested.

I would be honored to be on someones mp3 =)

thanks for the comments, im an attention whore i know

heres another song on the theme love one of my friends think its the best that i have made...

this is a song I made for a friend way back when.
it has quite a humoristic intro (if you speak swedish, its from the old anime series "cyborg 009" wich swedish dub is hillarious:lol: ) and I was´nt too serious when I made it but it turned out ok... I think

edit: if you dont speak swedish and are wondering what he is saying its something like "the djungle is unmercyfull"... though the words are all wrong... love that man--=)

long post

and dubble post

Djungeln är obarmhärtig! I loved that :P Good sound overall, great mixing! Although I would like more of that narrative speech throughout the song. If not, then it desperately needs a flute of some kind!

there is a flute actually but its kind of in background and it basicly plays the same stuff as the marimba. maybe I should add some more flute sections..

thanks for the comment... and yeah isnt he fun, its even "men djunglen e obarmhjärti" =)

He`I just found these songs that I have made for peoples birthdays in the past.

"Grattis Fredrik du har överlevt ett år till!!" translates to congratulations Fredrik you have survived another year!!. I made this one on my friends computer when he went to the store to buy candy (I had forgotten to buy him a present)...

I dont remember who the the other song was for.. =)


well enjoy my madness

I liked ur love theme, the grattis fredrik sounded way too random. Happy birthday was okay, I think you should have kept the drums going to the end and hit the cymbol with the last chord. Gj

Im glad that you liked my little love theme... and hey as for the birthday songs there is alot to improve, thanks for pointing out stuff though :)

anyway I just made this revision of a song I posted long ago called Toro, its kind of upbeat, ill post the midi again too if someone is interested in that.

Wow. That's really cool. It has really interesting rhythms. Awesome. :) I really like it.

Very strange melody, but I suppose it's pretty good, still. Sometimes I feel there are notes in the melody that stray from the harmony that sound awkward. Anyway, Djungle and Toro are pretty good despite these minor harmonic imperfections.

Deathraider*
I thank you humbly for the indepth analysis... nah seriously, I have noticed strange stuff in Djungel (not in toro though) but I cant pinpoint what it is, it would be really helpfull if you could specify wich notes that "stray" or a time in wich they do so.

Marlon*
You are truly a saint =) the master of pointing out the good stuff.

Tank juice both of you for comenting

Background music... have you ever played C&C Red Alert? well this is suposed to be one of those slow paced ingame songs... or title screen-song :think:

its quite meditative.

Did you use a DJ software to make this? It's pretty cool.

No not really, cubase, vst instruments, samples and a few plugins like bitcrusher (my favourite), delay and some soundengineering...
geeze I even bore myself.

thanks anyway!

not many coments on the last onex_x ... well, well.

This one was supposed to be an rpg battle kind of song but someone told me it was too slow for that, tell me what you think, ok?

Edit: I´ll put another song up too...Battle-fusion that is.

over an out

I thought your second piece was not bad but the strings for your first one sounded really...unusual. It didn't feel like it made a good glue for the piece.

First off, I have really liked your songs alot to be truthful. And yes I have gone through these 15 pages and I have like most of the songs that you have made. I am no expert at giving constructive criticism or any type of criticism nonetheless, but Ill give you my un-biassed opinion of the songs above. Battle hunter did sorta sound like a battle theme like one of those battles that are weird that are towards the end of the game, where its like live or die. But yeah in the middle of the song it sounded sort of sluggish, not many changes, and a little repetitive. But it was good, I did like it somewhat.

Battle fusion was also a really weird song. I can not seem to visualize like what in the world is happening in this song? And the ending of the song was awkward, it didn't seem to flow from the rest of the song.

But anyways you have made many good songs and I have no doubt that you will make more great songs, like the ones on previous pages.

Phew these last days have been really bussy... but I have been able to make a little music, but first off the coments.

KK: thanks for being frank, I have to agree with you; the strings in it are kind of weak. (this is where someone should say "no its the best strings I´ve ever heard!":P )

Pianocrazy90: Many low bows to you for taking the time to listen through this thread *points at the thread "my music"*.... there are some good songs in that thread too. thanks for speaking your mind. the end of Battle-fusion needs some explanation, that was an experiment gone terribly wrong, every little experiment cant go the right way. Sorry about that =). Anyway its always nice to see unfamiliar "faces".

Final Palace (loop): I think this song might raise some eyebrows, the ending anyway. the reason it ends abruptly is because its suposed to loop... oh and the midi is´nt complete....

I hope someone will have a spare minute to waste here in the midst of the christmass rush!

C Ya!

The Tuba/Trombone part is nicely written, but as you're a guitar player I'm a bit disappointed with your use of it. Also, the flute is cut off very abruptly when its note ends. The drums do work!

Just a song to show that im not retired, =).

these two songs are basicly the same and yet not at all similar soundwise.
please tell me wich one you prefer. I for one prefer the synth version...


oh and thank you Noir for your coment. no one ever said I was a good guitar player.:P

I also prefer the Synth version... for some reason (to me) it didn't sound right for piano :think: (cresc. and dim.?).

maybe that intro thing needs some dynamics or something.

New tune here... this one is for a game my friend is making.
it would be really helpfull if I could get some comments and/or suggestions on this.

It reminds me of NES! The nostalgia! I really like it, it sounds perfect for the BG music of a level of a Mario game or something.

Im glad you liked it, that means I can use.

Buzz: This one was suposed to be a boss song of some kind but it changed direction. in the middle I get the feeling that its for some racing game, x_x that was not intended. shit happens... This will almost certainly not be used as a boss theme anyhow.

Im gona go play some kid icarus or something.

Chow (ciao)

Reminds me somehow of the part in FFVII where Cloud is riding out of the city on a motorbike.

I havent ripped off Uematsu I asure you.:heh:

Ok, so I satt down and thought about what kind of song to make next... I had alot of different ideas so I made a medley out em. =)

thats why its a little non-fluent, cause its made of alot of themes.

Enjoy.^_^

No, I wasn't saying it was anything like the music from that, I was just saying that's the mental image that came to mind when I was listening to it, which goes along with you saying that it might fit better with a racing game.

Ok... so something with motors... =)

I think I might have stolen some chords from Mr. Uematsu in that medley though.:sweat:



wonder if anyone will notice:think:

I saw some pictures that really moved me tonight, so I made this little athmospheric piece with just strings, Think of it as a film score. It kind of conveys the way I felt... Goodnight to you all and sleep tight.

I felt like the instruments should be softer (for some reason :think: ). It felt like the whole song was staying at one dynamic level...

I don´t really agree with you on that there is only one dynamic level but what the heck, thats what I need coments for. the strings could have been softer at places but over all its the way I intended.

This next song is an RPG town-theme, the town is supposed to be heavy militarised, but there is a little town in there somewhere...

all coments are welcome, even if it contains no critisism.

edit: oh yeah its ment to loop...

It sounds very interesting (I especially liked the rhythmic ideas). A suggestion would be to give other instruments more important motifs or melodies, having just the violin playing the main movements can be tiring after a while.

got any instrument suggestions?

Something that contrasts well with violin... A good choice would be any solo brass instruments with a bigger sound (ie trumpet, trombones) since it's somewhat military-ish.

Reminds me of "The Battle" from Chronicles of Narnia. I really liked the feel of your theme, but I agree that perhaps a brass instrument would have given it more of a military feel, even if you had just repeated parts of the theme and perhaps added a bit more to it after what you already have.

After much consideration I left it pretty much as it was, though when my friend who is pretty much in charge said it was too heroic for what he had in mind I had to change the climax. It turned out quite nice anyway.
I have expanded on the altered theme and made a battle piece out of it.
Also there is a point at wich the hero falls into a crack in the ground and is transported into the caves. Sub Terra is the music played in the undergrounds. I have to say this piece have not been OKed yet. I would love some useful coments or suggestions on both of the pieces. or you could just say if you like ém or not.

The first one had the perfect feel! Good job.

The second one was really simple, but it had a cool feel. I can definitely see it being some kind of a cave or something in a game. Reminded me of songs from the game Fable (which the music for that game was done in part by Danny Elfman).

tanks man! thats all possitive stuff, wow.

Oooh 'Sub Terra' was very beautiful. Though I didn't really like how the shakers/tambourines were always there... I really liked the vibraphone, woodblocks/temple blocks/claves/whatever it was and the light gongs though. I felt that you could've added more percussions to it... Finger cymbals, ratchet, whips, and effects from the cymbals would be good choices.

Edit: Oh, another suggestion/comment: since you used only trills in strings, why don't you use some fancy effects like col legno, col legno battuto, or something to give the piece more colour?

Oooh 'Sub Terra' was very beautiful. Though I didn't really like how the shakers/tambourines were always there... I really liked the vibraphone, woodblocks/temple blocks/claves/whatever it was and the light gongs though. I felt that you could've added more percussions to it... Finger cymbals, ratchet, whips, and effects from the cymbals would be good choices.

Edit: Oh, another suggestion/comment: since you used only trills in strings, why don't you use some fancy effects like col legno, col legno battuto, or something to give the piece more colour?

the shakers add some solidity and continuance to the whole thing and there is something unnerving about them, but I know what you mean, they are on the verge of getting annoying.

on your edit: I would if I could, I dont have those kinds of samples =(. But hey as I said the piece has´nt even been aproved yet so Im bound to be adding stuff in later.

you thinking a piece of mine is beautiful is a first I think, ooh I feel all warm inside =) thanx

This is not a big project, just something that I blurted out in an hour or so.
You like?:huh:

God, I love the vibe it gives off. I could easily see this music as a backdrop for some madman or something.

Kick-ass. :thumb:

Niiiice.

Thaaaanks!

feel free to spam away on these ones. every coment is deeply appreciated. (attention-whore alert)

see ya´ll in a jiffy.

In the first one, the crackling noises just annoyed, me but I liked the rest of the song. It very spy-esque.

In the organ song, you made good use of polyphony. In some spots, you could have thickened the harmony a bit, but for the most part, that was good, too.

Third and forth ones...too short to be much, but not bad.

Fifth one...I kind of wish you could teach me the style of this one. I'm not very good at 21st Century stuff like that...

In the first one, the crackling noises just annoyed, me but I liked the rest of the song. It very spy-esque.

In the organ song, you made good use of polyphony. In some spots, you could have thickened the harmony a bit, but for the most part, that was good, too.

Third and forth ones...too short to be much, but not bad.

Fifth one...I kind of wish you could teach me the style of this one. I'm not very good at 21st Century stuff like that...

But crackling noises are nice:cry: ohh just imagine the Metroid prime title screen without that, ok I admit that crackle is much better than mine =)

im not sure what "style" the last song is in... my style I guess, anyway I cant really teach you that... I just wanted it to be a little creepy and stuff.



I made a new song today... well its basicly an old song of mine wich I played around with a bit. I even put some electric guitar in there. I think it kicks ass, but I got tired so its kind of missing some of the solos I had in mind. hope whoever listens to it will enjoy it.

just so you can gloat at my poor composing skills I uploaded the original midi too.:bleh:

Wow, I really like your celtic to gypsy to modern feel in your original version. Did you morph your synth bass in the middle? It's a smart move to change your atmosphere. But I felt that the melody can be justified further. It kind of rambled everywhere, even though it worked.

thanks sir Dot for your honesty and your kind words. The melody is really an issue in that one. I dont know what you mean by morphing the bass.

now this new one is for a game that has the projekt name CORE. its a futuristic shooter. this song is supposed to be the title song, the ingame songs will have more speed. There is not much of a melody.

you like as much as me like, me hope you be enjoyment!

I haven't listened to your comps in a while and man, just listen to those awsomeness! Your "Secret Orden"'s opening was very nice!

CORE makes me think of an old school arcade game.
It's really cool
and different.

:thumb:

wow! that was fast! thank you so much both of you.

it's cuz the nifty link you put with your signature :yes: